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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636972yr
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    what happened? the novel was good, too bad you deleted it ..................................................................................................

    altalt
    Mom with X-secrets
    Urban · Lo_Da
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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636973yr
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    I really like novels with this type of theme, but I didn't like the novel (I don't speak English, in case it wasn't translated correctly) -First, I don't like the MC at all, I'm used to reading a lot of things, but the MC's dialogues and the fact that he expresses his love the moment he meets someone doesn't look good, not even the conversations are interesting honestly disgusting -second, it is good that it has *** scenes and that it is the main thing, but doing so many chapters that are basically that, it becomes tedious and repetitive, I think I only saw until chapter 10, I think an image of a woman would be fine as it do some -Thirdly, it would be better to deepen the relationship with the female leads, or some kind of plot, it would be much better, and the *** scenes would not be so boring. I hope you do not take my criticism wrong, I really like novels with this type of theme, that's why I tell you, from my point of view, although I am only a person who reads novels. It is the first time that I do a review, I do not do it often because I am lazy, greetings.

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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636973yr
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    I'm from Argentina friend, I read your novel, after reading several novels I think your novel is one of the best, the character is well done, the story makes sense, I like the power of the character, since he is not so absurdly powerful, I rarely comment because I'm lazy, but I wish you would continue the story

    altalt
    Naruto: Bloodline Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · BrazilNobAutor
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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636973yr
    Posted

    In the end he dies or not?, ashido mina, I read with the translator and that part was not understood ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    altalt
    Naruto in My Hero Academia
    Anime & Comics · Andrewstewart002
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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636973yr
    Posted

    Es bastante bueno, lastima que no me puedo dar el lujo de pagar, éxitos ..............................................................................................................................

    altalt
    LOVE GURU
    Fantasy · XFABLES
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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636973yr
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    Estuvo bastante buena la novela, lastima que no la terminaste, pensaba que spider man en bnha, no iba a ser bueno pero me gusto, si hubiera romance con una milf mejor

    altalt
    MHA : THE NEW SPIDER
    Anime & Comics · Your_Drug_Supplier
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  • Daoist863697
    Daoist8636973yr
    Replied to Shamelezzz

    My English is not very good but I wanted to tell you that your novel is great, but please let mother Inko Midoriya be in the harem, with a slim body

    altalt
    Pervert reincarnate to MHA
    Anime & Comics · Shamelezzz
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