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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    It was a good read. You did a great job. Keep it up.

    Ch 34 Wraith 2
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
    Replied to MiuNovels

    oh it's fine now. I am looking forward to it again, I said my comments based on the current chapter.

    Ch 15 Ferris 1
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Great chapter.

    Ch 30 Mountain of the Dead 1
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Good job.

    Ch 29 Learning to Converse
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Great Chapter. The quality has increased.

    Ch 24 A Short Respite 
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Awesome Chapter.

    Ch 20 Exploration 3
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Great Chapter.

    Ch 19 Exploration 2
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    OHHHHH! RYUS'S FIRST WORD!

    "Wh . . y . . ."
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Congrats Ryu!

    Ferris made sure to circle Ryu's slit in a light touch of her lips as he released his hot essence inside her mouth.
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Good job.

    Ch 17 Ferris 3
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
    Replied to MiuNovels

    Yea, will get better with time. You have a lot of skill in explaining emotions and the world itself.

    Ch 14 In Dire Situation 2
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    So far you got no likeable characters in my opinion. I have stopped looking forward to any new progress in any of them.

    Ch 15 Ferris 1
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    14 Chapters for this? That's 14 thousand words to just travel some distance. That's all I can remember. More than 5 thousand went to describing a battle, it became boring for me midway. Quality has went down but still decent.

    Ch 14 In Dire Situation 2
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Cecily The Ugly Filth: -800

    The soonest she returned to the kingdom, she would hold a funeral for Dozla with Ryu's head as an offering to appease his soul and her anger.
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    FieryDao2yr
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    Cecily The Ugly Filth: -600

    Dozla's death was the last straw. No matter what, she couldn't, wouldn't forgive him.
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Cecily -500 **Level Up: Cecily -> Ugly Filth**

    Though Murok kept reminding Cecily that they needed Ryu for the days ahead, Cecily remained stubborn and deaf from the old man's plea until Murok gave up after countless persuasions.
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Cecily -400

    Cecily swept her gaze to all of those slaves. When she made sure that none of them were human and mostly halfbreeds, she flipped her hair and ordered. "Kill them all."
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Character development is one thing but isn't she too dumb?

    Ch 13 In Dire Situation 1
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Cecily -200 I don't know what you have in plans for her author but if she is too irredeemable, no amount of your justifications will do, at least for me.

    "This is not the time for your discoveries, teacher! How do you plan on compensating me for this blunder?! He's just a stupid idiot, beast! I want him dead!"
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  • FieryDao
    FieryDao2yr
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    Cecily -100

    "This is all your fault!"
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