Artem_Trey

it's at the 5th layer perfection and you want to break through to the 5th layer? so you're going from peak 5 to just 5?

the speed thing was so unnecessary. I get physical and magical defense or attack but why speed, its basically just agility

so why introduce yourself if you're just gonna buy it anyway, thought you were gonna intimidate him or propose real world transaction

just sounds so mafia

Yep its slop, you dont have to advertise yourself.

I thhought it'd be intersting but it's turning out to be simplistic slop, with an author who's half assed at grammar but insists on using words,phrases and terms he doesnt fully understand

or just 50%

twice as cheap? seriously? It doesnt work like that if it was double the prce its twice as much triple - three times as much quadruple - 4 times as much YOU DO NOT USE THE WORDS "x times as much" (x to rep the number), when the price is discounted or less than less than the market price. ITs a grammar issue, just use simple english. Half price. if its half the price, just write half the price

For people who are suposed to be nobles, these people get beat up a lot

its wavering attention ot short short attention span wavering by itself just means undecisive