HiddenPangolin

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I think it's a genuine human moment for not knowing if your loved one was ok or not, but I feel like she should, at some point, apologize for getting physical at times instead of talking it out

Stones.

I understand everyone would dislike the novel at around the 100 chapter mark, but I want to offer a new perspective. You know those long-running soap operas with hopelessly contrived plots that twist and turn endlessly until the story becomes about f#cking cultivating??? I very much understand the view of people who dropped, but I would say if you like trashy soap operas, this is like that in novel form.

I'm very happy to see Peter full sorcery mode. Random question: Have you ever thought about Peter upgrading his suit? Like to Iron-Spider or something like that. As useless as it would be with his abilities, I think upgrading his suit would be fun to see

I've got to say that this was one of the best quality Marvel fanfics I've read of all time. The writing was impeccable and impressive, just overall a fun read. However... there are some nitpicks. I disliked how, for the most part, everything felt very caged and contained. I felt like there weren't a lot of good character interactions, with everything being really limited to 5 characters. Then, there was the fact that throughout the story, it was all a ton of explanation and practice of the abilities. The perfect way I would describe it is that there was a complete lack of emotion in the story. It became almost mechanical in how it was just, more. Additionally, it felt like the only things that really happened in the story were Hydra, X-men, and a little bit of Dr. Strange. Beyond that, I felt like Draul and his abilities became "I can do everything," which made me sort of disappointed. Overall, it's a good read though.

Something that's bothers me is how Peter regularly just blows through everything with portals and his augmented strength. I think it would be more interesting to see him use other things he's learned, gadgets, or different styles.Like for instance, making it fun by using only spells against Wong, or by sneaking in and extracting Alexei out of prison.Also, it would be nice to get a couple of update chapters on different things, like Danny Rand, Loki, and stuff like that. Also, it would be interesting to see the return of Genie or Deadpool as sidekicks. Anyway, thanks for chapter, can't wait for the next

always the pink haired girls

My thoughts are that it would be interesting if you could take specific flaws to gain more points in a class, similar to how rock Lee had no talent for anything other than taijustsu. I understand that it's a certain play style, but I would fund it interesting to see a sort of specific min max build, like how in project zomboid you can take certain negative perks to get more perka overall. Like taking the illiterate perk to upgrade strength. Idk. something like that