I really don't care if Sasuke and Hinata are a couple, throughout this fanfic Sasuke has had a very different personality than the canon one. I imagine that everyone who doesn't agree with this couple still sees canon Sasuke instead of Sasuke fanfic. . The truth is I would like the Sasuke x Hinata couple to continue just so that the story stays the same because I like how it's going, if you start changing things because of the readers' responses it will stop being your story

Honestly, I have no problems with the MC killing powerful villains (Darkside, Brainiac among others) but it really bothers me like many but they criticize Batman for not killing his villains, he complies with capturing them, he does not kill them because it goes against his beliefs, it is respectable but So let some judge or someone from the government put the death penalty on dangerous villains. In conclusion, many DC fanfic MCs like to criticize Batman for his policy of not killing when in the world of DC the death penalty exists but never. they give them to the villains

Can you send the link to the original novel?

I have liked the story so far, the only thing that is bothering me is that the mc is becoming a dispenser of jutsus and all kinds of techniques for people outside of his clan (seriously, showing his style of kensutsu to Yugao is going a bit overboard )

you are doing the translation of the original novel (Hogwarts: Starting from Creating the Lord of the Rings). or are you making changes?

The translation is good although I haven't seen you tell me the name of the original story: Hogwarts: Starting from Creating the The Lord of the Rings, but if you are going to make changes, please make the mc not so attached to Hermione

This fanfic is good but not at the level of having such a rating of 4.9, normally I would give it 4 stars or 3.5 stars but it seems a little suspicious to me that it has such good ratings, I have no idea if it is a translation or it is completely original by the author but it is It is impossible not to see that this story has a lot of inspiration from Chinese Harry Potter fanfic where the romantic interests are 99% of the time Hermione and Cho in addition to Dahpne and Fleur. This fanfic has a good premise but it is a little disappointing that the mc sometimes does things that border on simp with Hermione

I find this story incredible but these last 3 chapters were cliche after cliche, he meets Hermione on the train, I'm not saying it's impossible but seriously that train is huge and the probability of meeting someone relevant from the canon is small and the situation it gets even more unlikely when cho chang is introduced pirnso there were better ways to present the possible love interests, except for the above i like the story

So in Ninja War 4 (if it happens in your fanfic) Madara won't appear? Otherwise, the moment Kaguya appears, Naruto will carry the entire team 7 as a backpack, if due to some plot twist they do not fall into the infinite tsukuyomi

option 4 mc without morals and ethics, wants to transfer the madness of the crown to another person, like the winter king did in fionna and cake This wish creates a new villain who will seek revenge against the MC and will be powerful.

I honestly wouldn't mind the Mac nerf if you had put him in from the beginning of the story when he just made the wishes, now we have a MC with the possibility of going crazy with guilt when he hurts someone in his ice king mode, really already I imagine you do that story arc

In a battle the rival has to give everything, the MC is practically disrespecting his rivals "I will not use haki to make it a fair fight" How do you think his rivals would take that news? They can only defeat the MC because he does not take battles seriously, it is necessary for his teachers to kick his butt to make him stop that type of thinking

Could the mc ask the system for the recipe to make pokeball with apricorn?

shield and hydra hid that howard and his wife were murdered and now the mc mentions it without caring that there are several soldiers around him and maybe one or another undercover agent of hydra or shield, in the best of cases nick fury appears before the mc to question it in the worst case scenario they send the winter soldier

Could the mc create a technique similar to the Annihilation Maker? create creatures with its shadow and only limited by the imagination and cursed energy of its user.

It is true that there are some comics where Barbara Gordon is not a batgirl, but at least she has a relationship with the batfamily so the mc has been very careless with respect to Barbara

story real name: modern family: simp ped0***le gacha Starting when the mc is introduced as someone who was clearly an adult in his past life and who clearly sees himself as someone older who falls in love with a 13-year-old alex, if the mc is okay with starting a relationship with a girl when He thinks like an adult, the author's thinking is really questionable. If this story could be half of this story: Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family) there they do present a mc who knows how to deal with younger girls and create interest while he is with more mature girls, all in perfect balance.

summoning an anime character and showing such blatant brainwashing feels a bit wrong, maybe say the mc will summon rias from a universe where the chaos brigade plot progressed faster than in the original world and let's say that rizevim achieved the goal before rias reincarnated issei so you could say that rias feels grateful because the mc "saved" her and so it could be with the other summons, summon them from an apocalyptic version ethics of its origin universe, anyway I support your story, it is interesting

Could you give the mc the tony stark template so he's not so obsessed with alex? Because it seems that this whole plot of looking for a relationship with Alex when they are barely 13 years old is to prevent her from kissing another boy, author is it okay that you like Alex's character but that he has liked her since she was 13? I would understand if they were 15 or 16, that leaves a lot to think about with respect to the mc, maybe in his past life he was a rehabilitated ********* who got out of prison

all the potential that could be had and the mc is almost bordering on the simple with alex