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    Charles_Warriors4d ago
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    This story is great, but isn't the MC a little pathetic? It's fine that he likes Nejire and considers her a good friend, but basing so many of his decisions on her is going a bit too far: "I'll become a hero because Nejire is going to do it too." "I'll visit that place because Nejire wants to go." "I'll eat this food because Nejire told me to eat it." What might happen in the future: The MC will say: "Nejire wants to have five boyfriends, so I’ll be the first one, and I’ll take care of finding the other four." Or maybe: "Nejire has dirty feet, so I’ll use my tongue to clean them because she told me to." I’m exaggerating a lot, but seriously, can Isshun make more decisions on his own? And can Nejire or anyone else stop influencing his decisions?

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    Charles_Warriors17d ago
    Replied to Max_Striker

    I totally get what you mean. I was thinking that, even though Nolan is strong, the power gap between him and Kaisen isn't big enough to make it take the MC a long time to completely defeat him, and as a result, Omni-Man would end up becoming that kind of tragic villain and comic relief who hates the protagonist but ends up getting humiliated

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    Charles_Warriors17d ago
    Replied to Max_Striker

    Hahaha, you're right—that would be pretty bad for Kaisen, but I thought there might be a plot twist where the system lets him bring Sebas back to life, but the condition is that Nolan's curse of hatred would be passed on to another "random" character, and that character would be Thragg

  • Charles_Warriors
    Charles_Warriors17d ago
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    Is there a chance that Nolan's curse of hatred could be passed on to Thragg? I mean, Omni Man is strong, but the MC will end up completely outmatching him in no time. But if he earns Thragg's eternal hatred, I doubt Kaisen will ever want to leave the Infinite Castle

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    Charles_Warriorsa month ago
    Replied to Zeaser

    So, is this story a translation, or are you using AI to write it? If it's the former, I understand that you can't make any changes, but if it's the latter, then you just don't want to do the extra work of editing your prompts

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    Charles_Warriorsa month ago
    Replied to Juhiko

    You're right, but my comment focused on the fact that, in another story by this author, the protagonist chose the Sharingan and the Uzumaki bloodline after a period of reflection in which he weighed the pros and cons of his choice, which granted him an enormous amount of chakra and, therefore, the ability to use the Sharingan to its full potential, and although, as you say, the author deliberately made the protagonist of this story seem a bit foolish, what I’m trying to say is that if we take both protagonists—the one who chose the Sharingan and the Uzumaki lineage and this one who chose the Rinnegan—and consider them “real people,” then we could see the difference in intelligence between the two. As I wrote in my comment, there are people like that who don’t think about the future or the consequences of their actions, so I think the protagonist’s personality in this story is very similar to that of a real person.

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    Charles_Warriors2 months ago
    Replied to Slither21

    Although I agree with you on almost everything you say, in this case the protagonist has only himself to blame for choosing a skill that relies on a specific type of energy. It’s like if someone asked you to choose what to take to a desert island and you chose a TV or an appliance that needs electricity when there’s nothing at the place you’re going to, Honestly, I found the protagonist’s decision curious, since it was a very human and realistic action; because let’s be honest, there are a lot of people who don’t think long-term about the consequences of their actions, since if the MC had thought it through more carefully, he would have remembered that in the world of Naruto, not many could handle having a Rinnegan, and it would essentially be a death sentence if an ordinary ninja obtained it. If the protagonist had been smarter, he would have chosen a power that didn’t require extraordinary physical ability or some kind of power like, for example, a Marvel mutant power, among others

  • Charles_Warriors
    Charles_Warriors2 months ago
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    I have to say that so far it’s been a pretty interesting story; the wishes the MC made were pretty good, though I did question his sanity a bit when he basically chose “hell mode,” since the DC universe is dangerous on its own and now it’s merged with Marvel—but I can’t help but applaud his bravery, even though I think he should have made a wish to make his body stronger, since both the DC and Marvel universes are full of magical objects or scientific inventions capable of inhibiting powers like reality warping, chaos magic, and various similar abilities. Well, that last part is just my opinion, and I don’t mean it as a criticism, since from what I’ve just read, this story has a lot of potential

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    Charles_Warriors2 months ago
    Commented

    There's a possibility that the MC might tell Magamind to create a memory-erasing weapon; since they've already stated that Norman suffers from multiple personalities, it wouldn't be all that strange for him to lose all his memories.

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