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    Charles_Warriors9 days ago
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    I don't think he asked for the suit to be able to fly? Riding around with the gyrocopter is pretty inefficient.

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    Charles_Warriors9 days ago
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    Can't you get a teleportation ability to your lovers? Since he currently has Delia he can only use it once a week, you could make it so that only by getting 2 more lovers he can use it 2 times a week or something like that.

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    Charles_Warriors9 days ago
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    Well looking at these last few chapters and then your profile I see you have an obsession with the futa genre, I respect your tastes but it's not a story I would look to read, I usually ignore the ancillary volume so this time it played against me was my fault.

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    Charles_Warriors10 days ago
    Posted

    The story is somewhat interesting, but I can't help but feel a little disappointed by the synopsis and the title I had thought that a character oc or maybe someone reincarnated with the power of the Boosted Gear turned into quirk and considering that there are quirks like one for all, all for one and new order would not ruin the scale of power it would just be like a one for all but more efficient and even the balance breaker could be explained as an evolution of the quirk the truth had me excited with that perspective, it would be nice if you added dxd to the title or in the description.

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    Charles_Warriors16 days ago
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    First the MC should cure or make all for one stronger (whichever comes first), he should make sure that all for one defeats all might in an overwhelming way, the best thing would be for him to die in a pathetic way by being infinitely surpassed and if thragg has at most the power of an all might prime and he cures all for one so that he is also in his prime in a battle between both the MC will win without doubts and by defeating the enemy that killed the symbol of peace without problems, thragg will gain a lot of sympathy and praise from everyone not to mention that the government would try to gain his favor, that would be a good base to gain everyone's trust.

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    Charles_Warriors16 days ago
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    This story is great, but I feel that the MC is acting a bit arrogant by going to a neutral country, making demands and threatening that very well could trigger a war if the iron country reveals it and considering that onoki would not miss the opportunity to attack the MC and maybe iwa will make an alliance with kumo to generate pressure and demand that the mc be handed over or there is war or something ( although of course Tsunade would not fall for the threats) I would like what the MC did in these last chapters to have consequences.

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    Charles_Warriors21 days ago
    Replied to Commonnerfer

    Well it doesn't really matter, I only mentioned it to give more challenges to the MC, maybe currently he doesn't have access to all the Pokémon but in the medium/short term he will be able to use them , in other words he would be a version of a Gary Stu character merged with Doraemon able to bring out any Pokémon needed for the plot and all incredibly strong, maybe only Lionel and Cynthia could cause him problems.

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    Charles_Warriors21 days ago
    Replied to Commonnerfer

    I am a more casual player of Pokémon go I play it when I have time, I meant that the mc can use all Pokémon from GO but these would be in their first evolutionary phase, you have a Charizard? Then it would be a Charmander and so on mind and the Pokémon that have no evolutionary stage would be with the same CP that you captured them, it may sound quite limiting and even nerfed but considering that the MC would have available a lot of Pokémon with perfect stats could have a practically invincible team without spending a lot of time looking for Pokémon. I understand it's your story but the concept you bring up is quite interesting and while MC stories that are OP or as close to OP as possible with fairly powerful or convenient traps are entertaining not many authors manage to make those stories stretch very far, because in the end it all boils down to the MC letting something bad happen and holding back so it doesn't get resolved right away and he can reap the rewards, what I mentioned may sound quite limiting but the MC having Pokémon with perfect stats at his disposal is like if cynthia could have a whole team of Pokémon with the same strength as garchomp that would be pretty strong

  • Charles_Warriors
    Charles_Warriors21 days ago
    Posted

    The concept of this story is interesting but it's too rushed it goes from 0 to 100 and even though the gimmick he got isn't necessarily OP he can use a fully evolved Pokémon and who knows what amount of power from the start it's too much , at first I thought the MC was going to be able to use all his Pokémon from Pokémon go but they would all be in their first evolutionary stage and with the same power they had when they were first caught in the game and the MC to avoid awkward questions would only use Pokémon he could catch in Kanto in other words he wouldn't come out with that he caught a chimchar or another Pokémon from a different region.

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    Charles_Warriorsa month ago
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    Considering that in today's world it is a fusion of anime such as kengan ashura, Baki, among others. It is possible that you can also add the history's strongest disciple kenichi taking into account the dynamics of fights and if possible also the ikkitousen one.