Charles_Warriors

So far everything is great and in my opinion is quite realistic, I'm tired of all those stories where an MC is reborn in some comic world and automatically wants to be a hero and risk his life, it is impossible to believe that a random person is transported to another world and automatically wants to save everyone, on the contrary your story is very good, I like that the MC has no hero complex and go saving everyone, human beings are selfish and it is normal that they want to improve their quality of life and if they want to make a difference they should create machines that make crops grow faster to end hunger, machines that make trees grow faster to combat deforestation and new medicines that cure others, and when someone endangers their family or the earth they can show their power, it is not necessary to go and stop bank robbers and common criminals.

This story is a translation? Because it looks like a Chinese fanfic with a psychopathic MC, because it breaks the immersion that someone kills for the first time and doesn't feel anything, although that's the problem with fan stories, they go to the extreme with the feeling of guilt for killing a person or on the contrary they don't feel anything, there is no in-between.

You know that Pyrokinesis exists, right? It is a psychic power, and there are even fictional characters that using friction with their psychic powers can create fire, although the story is already advanced so it does not matter.

It is possible that the MC can live beyond 25 years, let's take yoriichi as an example (I understand that he is a special case, he was practically a divine birth to defeat Muzan) I take him as an example because I doubt that the next demon hunters that will awaken the mark will have even 10% of the physique and strength that yoriichi has but the MC could be the one that comes closest because of all the training he did and also when there was something wrong with his body he would realize it, many diseases or body problems can be solved if they are discovered in time or when it just appears, so I think there is a high probability that the MC will not die at 25 by the mark, suddenly at 40 or 50 or half the age that yoriichi reached.

Sirzechs is a peace lover but everyone has their limit and in this case Sirzechs diplomatic option where he makes behind the scenes plans to end Rias engagement were a failure only the nuclear option is left, that's why I mentioned the wedding night situation, when Rias and Riser are supposed to consummate the marriage obviously Rias would not want to and if Riser tries to force it, he would be turned to dust by Sirzechs and there would be no one to demand justice for him.

The persistence and stubbornness of Riser and his family is to be commended, Rias genuinely despises Riser and it has been shown that sirzechs loves his sister very much, what do they hope will happen in the future: "Riser marries Rias", then on their wedding night obviously Rias would not want to have her first time with Riser and if he forces her, it would only be enough for her to go crying to her brother and bam Riser vaporized, with sirzechs charisma no doubt he will get public opinion on his side or simply because of his power nobody will do anything, it would be better for Riser's family to break their engagement.

Aokiji knew perfectly well akainu that he would go for the kill without any doubt and not to mention that aokiji despises akainu, his personality and his way of thinking and how he would transform the navy, of course he would go all out, just because aokiji was soft on luffy and let Robin go doesn't mean he is indecisive, just because he did not consider them dangerous and because they were close or relatives of people close to aokiji ( jaguar d Saul and Garp) so yes aokiji went all out against akainu if it was not like that then the fight would not have lasted 10 days, any moment of doubt or distraction in front of akainu would have ended the fight right away.

Aokiji lost because he did not have a more powerful haki, for me both admirals were equal in power, the difference lay in the power of his fruit and akainu had the upper hand in that case.

The MC will experiment with Zetsu? I mean implanting white Zetsu cells increases the chakra also gives a minor regeneration and if you are lucky (I say lucky because there are 2 kinds of Zetsu, those that Madara cultivated with the cells of the first Hokage and there are the others that are not), you can acquire the mokuton, the drawbacks is that you must have a strong lineage like the Uchiha or Uzumaki or have implanted a doujusu like the Sharingan to avoid being consumed by the cells which is what almost happened to Danzo after he lost all the Sharingan in his battle and the MC by having the tenseigan which is a doujusu at the level of the Rinnegan technically should not have problems in implanting the cells of white Zetsu only benefits because it really needs to have more chakra.

The story looks interesting, but you have a somewhat immature thought, it is true that Batman does not kill his villains, but isn't DC's US government at fault? Just capturing the villains alone Batman does much more than all the cops in Gotham combined, I remind you in the DC world there are laws, there are also trials and there is also the death penalty, you are just applying logic to Batman's behavior but you are not doing it in the DC world in general, you say:"Batman doesn't kill his villains, then they escape and harm innocents" instead of saying "Batman captures villains, but the US justice system considers them insane so they can't have death penalty and sends them to prison" who is the real culprit?