after years i am back to read ur story my friend 1800 coins and most likey all go to u

that's fair personally I feel romance usually adds to a story but for this specific one I feel I understand still I'd say side woukd be interesting

do I know how I can find a link to the discord

I don't think ur wording was bad its just that with sentences like that maybe if u wanna be extra careful put some kind of emoji or exclamation etc to ensure the tone of the message gets across

exactly

my dearest author have u taken a break?

jk they are both correct bet I made u second guess urself

correct word hear would be snuck [img=recommend]

this builds the worlds story and explains things and gives more depth to side characters what do u want a flat world filled with flat characters

not at all an hour in the gym 5 days a week if u est well is enough ti be well built unless u have terrible genetics

me aswell especially way the emoji🤣

less go astaroth

Ashton has a cheese ability he can rarely ever use

look constructive criticism the constant mentions of how sexy everyone is amd hoe frost keeps getting hard is grating and just bad seem goes for all the women whipping the men and being in charge

I like that he isn't gonna just kill them he's effectively a force.of nature not evil its a good direction

YEEEES I love glaives finally and an ice glaive bro perfection

this is shaping up to be a good story

Well that's not true he's still u ique he's the original she will be a watered down him

u sick monster

DOCTOR WHO REFERENCE TIMEY WIMEY