thank uu, is there was something i need to improve on?

theres not much chapters so far but it is interesting up till now... it makes me curious about her backstory and whenever the characters say its just deja vu, it prob isnt 😂 i also really love the characters because they have a unique personality but theres still not enough chapters to see the character development... there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but it doesnt affect the story so its fine i look forward to the story development and all the best!!

the characters r still a mystery up till now but the sypnosis really drew me in, i’m looking forward to their interaction and watching the mysteries unfold... however, what i like most is the chapter length, though this novel still has little chapters, the length of one chapter is really long, about a 2 chapter length? i hope you can continue updating and good luck on yoir writing journey!

thank you!!

yup i will finish this story, i just have a lot of school work to do so i am slightly overwhelmed... i will continue writing soon (in about a week?) and hopefully i can give a mass release when i start writing again

thank u 🥺💞

hihi （‐＾▽＾‐）author here just some information for the book 1) there will be no major love rival 2) everyone will have a happy ending except for the villains? 3) no major misunderstandings... enjoy the story and thank you for reading °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°