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genona1yrCommentedwhy haven't you punched her yet?
"Yes. Now go and never come back."- genona1yrCommented
Uhh what was this sentence supposed to say?
He was barely a teenager. - genona1yrReplied to DollyRoma
That's not love. Even if it was, who would want it?
Anna blinked up at Ray who stood over the mess, glaring at her like she was the most disgusting thing he had ever lay sight on while trying not to die of embarrassment as she heard snickers from the people standing just at the door. - genona1yrCommented
So the alpha had no idea his beta was a POS until now?
Alpha Damien had given him a piece of his mind this morning which Included getting a fist aimed at his jaw. Marcy was his little sister after all, and he couldn't risk seeing her hurt; especially not by her own husband. - genona1yrCommented
I feel like third-person omniscient POV should not be so opinionated about a character. Show, don't tell
"You sneaky thief! How dare you steal from me," the girl with shiny yet slightly curled black hair said. She was popularly called the Queen by the blind students who knew nothing other than fawning over a rich brat like her. - genona1yrCommentedLord Bentham nodded his head in agreement. "Princesses do not think a lot. You need to rest. I will take care of everything."
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At the end of last chapter, she took off running and was long gone. Now she's suddenly back with her husband.
Ophelia paused for a brief second. She saw Gerald had been accompanied by Mirabelle, who was surprisingly sweating, with a sword strapped to her waist and a bright glimmer in her eyes. Ophelia realized Mirabelle must've slipped away from tutoring to train with the soldiers. - genona1yrCommented
When was this??
Ophelia shakily nodded, remembering the inn and her decision to have the carriage gifted to them. - genona1yrCommented
She ran to the closet to get a robe already though?
"O-oh, w-welcome," Ophelia said with a shaky smile whilst shrinking back awkwardly. She was fully aware of how naked she was, but neither woman seemed to mind. - genona1yrCommented
*He's
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Michelin stars only go up to three
Restaurant La Palace was a very popular and fancy french restaurant that specializes in seafood dishes. It opened two years ago and has been quite the talk of the town because of the owner, Bridgette Remise, a popular master chef, who appeared on several reality TV survival-show named Great Master Chef, and already collected three five-star Michele rated restaurants in France, Los Angeles, and China. - genona1yrCommented
How does a person even get apple seeds in their mouth. You'd have to bite into the core of the apple to get to the seeds.
Hazel could feel the eyes of everyone was set on her yet she did not care. Holding the apple in her hand, she took quick bites to it and then spat out the seeds on the plate with a bit of her saliva dropped on the dish to create a scowl on her so-called mother face who was not more than infuriated. - genona1yrCommented'Here goes our speciality! A gracious nod attack!'
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Just can't see any logic behind putting her in an obviously dangerous situation, when she is the only person who can read the book and tell him what he seems desperate to know. The male lead would have to be a simpleton for things to go this way.
Cassandra knew that Lord Bentham was right. Duke Salvador was an unreasonable person at times and looking at his recent behavior who knows where he might call her next. Cassandra wanted to survive no matter what so what would be great than accepting an advantageous proposal that had come to her on its own. - genona1yrCommented
I think it means to say, "impression of the Duke be shattered?" Author please be more careful with your proof reading, this is enough to drive a reader insane!
This paragraph has been deleted. - genona1yrCommentedCassandra does want to be friendly with others. She wanted to be companions who played around, smiling and being happy, but she could not. She was alone in this whole wild world, ready to be slandered like an animal.
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WOW run-on sentences are bad in this book. That's a lot of commas for a single period.
He was a man with no respect for a woman, he used magic on me just to have my lips, he would have just given me a light kiss that could take a second, but his went on never-ending and it was a kiss that will linger on my mind because it was my first, and it was stolen by this man, a man who was now my husband by law, not by my heart, it will be torture for me, because I will spend the rest of my life with a stranger. - genona1yrCommented
Aren't they already in the castle? Man this story is all over the place.
Killorn wanted to make love to her on every surface possible. When they got back to the castle, there would not be a single corner he didn't take her. He'd make sure of it. He'd watch her legs tremble in the shadows, whilst she clenched him tightly. - genona1yrCommented
So she finally called him by his name at some point after the last chapter, I guess
After glancing a few times, Ophelia saw who blocked her and remembered what led up to this moment. Her face burned when she recalled how many times she screamed his name and climaxed. - genona1yrCommentedAltren's eyes slightly narrowed in a naughty gaze. "In my drawer. It's a blue half-used tube," he ran to the bathroom and shut the door.