why put the same chapter up more than once

please continue asap

why no more chapters?

please please continue releasing chapters for this book

I hope this continues

I'm liking this story please continue to post more chapters please

please get the she her he and his correct you keep changing them and it's confusing.

did anyone else read suprise mother fuxker and not the mother father that was there?

wasn't his intelligence higher due to the syrum

should totally be called the nether or the abyss not just plain underworld...

glad it wasn't just me thought I bloody lost it

you need to check the points again I think you typed wrong number for the 1st place

FFS what a cliff

a double wand one dark wood with light core and a light wood with dark core. he can be a true neutral grey mage

i only lowered my stars in this review due to a few reasons once MC goes to the academy its like a totally different story and only has same characters in it like before he goes there hes called thirteen night and is dressed handsomely because he has the dead princes clothes yet hes called by his name without him ever introducing himself and once he goes to his first class hes wearing normal clothes. next the runes he condensed he doesnt seem to use anymore only using beasts and their abilities. he could condense a flight rune then he could fly without his pet. it is a great story but there doesnt seem to be any consistency throught the story. otherwise im loving the book and is interesting but like i said its like 2 stories instead of just 1

2nd last sentence had a problem only because athena refered to herself as himself and she as he in the last sentence

hahaha

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

instead of strangle should be storm or something as its wind blades that attack and not something that holds which strangle suggests

i realised it after i pressed add but couldnt be bothered redoing the whole thing again at least my point was made.