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First impressions are the most important part. Like the other one you made, had an amazing impression of what to lookout for. Which made us all excited to wait another chapter. Sometimes it was boring in the middle of the story, but the first impression made me stay. All i wanted to see was how funny it would be when something was bound to happen(Becoming a god or getting legendary super saiyan). We all knew that was bound to happen. All i ever expected in your other novel was excitement... This just took off a bad start and makes it easier to give up on. Thank you for reading it through sir ^_^