nice

it was good

ok I just looked it up and yea your right

nice chapter man but me personally wouldn't think united stats of America would wast a million dollar missile on some slow moving wyverns that a A10 can take out and doge at the same time

nice chapter a little short but it's better than nothing good over all I like how the fights played out and the you detail things isn't long and annoying but short and to the point I like that alit keep it up man and good luck can't wait to read more

good block so far

same thing can be said about 682 the unkillable lizard what happened to him I think he just locked them away just like the foundation did

nice first chapter good world building and character interdiction keep it up would yea

no he has hyper regenerative ability that makes me immune to most diseases

nice chapter I like the story telling and the descriptions.

the pacing is nice and slow and great chapter

nice work a little speedy but I like it

if you did restart your book I would like it if you hade the mc just have force powers but I do like the reward system you made the mc have it's nice as it make sense for the book and tells me lore about starwars I didn't know about but as of now I still like your book as it is