Killswitch2537

Very good so far, i do feel that Vivian could be doing more with her future knowledge but I am only 15 chapters in so far so we shall see as the story progresses

you should delete this review, it literally spoils the ending.

honestly terrible chapter dude, i almost dropped it because of this

hey genuine question, how does the character having a harem advance the story or characters developed for you?

bro you only leave 1 star reviews

you won't kidding

you have given more one star reviews than I've ever seen

I think it's a good story so far, I wish the time in overlord was a little long and better explained and these I really wish the author would go and remove the A/N on every chapter saying they "don't care" or they're "lazy" because even if it's true it's not adding anything to the story by sticking it in there multiple times per chapter

I hope he doesn't add either, those 2 categories mess up every fanfiction

bro, it was going so good, I'm so upset I didn't see that Haram tag until I got 60 chapters in. sex scenes and harams are a sure fire way to switch a story that is paced really well to a story that the character gets 50 things done in 1 chapters then he has sex the next chapter then he gets another 50 things done then he goes back to having sex with a different girl. it really messes up the pace and enjoyablity of a story