Lisa_Lynn_

I really wanted to like this book. I love books where they get a 2nd chance, however the translation is horrible! I can deal with some grammer errors, but this translator doesn't seem to have a grasp of English pronouns. It is just too confusing when they are referring to the leading lady in one sentence as a she or her and in the very next calling her a he or him. This is a constant problem that try as I might, I just cannot get past. Thumbs down.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

This chapter has been a major disappointment. Winston is my fav and for them to finally get together in this fashion is discouraging.