Viv_Fungster

The storyline is great but some details are missing in certain parts and seem to speed up what happens. It runs of. A lot so there’s no stable timeframe. It would be great to hear more about the god of recarnation and it could have included more details about the nemesis. The fact that two characters were recarnate those making it interesting but it barely talks about it. This story is still a great read. I hope the author considers writing a sequel.

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