Newports

Overall the story definitely can be better it’s a interesting premise but excuted poorly I read a lot of chapters because the idea was interesting but wanted to stop reading a lot during the story. It started off pretty good with obvious problems but for a new author better then most of fanfic then they ended titanomqchy and it went downhilll. First off the mc for some reason ran away because he didn’t want to start a war with Zeus that wouldnt even make sense to happen because literally everyone liked him more then Zeus it wouldve just been Zeus vs everyone and the mc alone could destroy Zeus. And for some reason after he left zeus is still king when he’s the weakest sibling in this story and doesnt even have control over the sky. After the war we go into a long and tedious naruto arc where the mc is naruto and changed basically nothing to me it seemed like the whole arc was just so the mc could get with kaguya. After that we finally get to basically where the story is now which is the where the mc beat Zeus and took over the Greek pantheon and at this point it just seems like a gotta catch them all harem story literally every female seems to have feelings for him including his mother and everyone thinks he’s the best person ever. So for summary the story is stale the characters are just hype men for the mc and the mc doesn’t want to have any conflict which means he basically changes nothing of the original story.

It’s because the comics dont do him justice they just get literally anyone else to think for Superman most of the time Batman

Already can tell this is trash nobody from that world would call him Injustice Superman thats only for readers.

Who?

No y’all just can’t understand his genius

Not really he better then most but he still had his problems

Yeah that’s true but 8 tons of punching force isn’t enough to even damage homelander

Yeah I know bro