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Complain_World2yrReplied to RCrasherThat's exactly what I thought 🤣
"Master, it's lunchtime." A robot walked out of the room and made an inviting gesture to Li Nianfan.- Complain_World2yrReplied to Random_Black
But then he starts calling himself flowey and realizes he has the power to save and reset this world wich some beings call undertale
Plant-life tended to develop similarly across planets with water, so it was no surprise that their genetic structure was not sufficiently distinct or special enough to produce abilities with. - Complain_World2yrReplied to Martin_Watson
Exactly sometimes when I'm reading a good novel they explain how difficult teleportation is or this or that but then they just casually wip out a spacial ring or spacial bag and it's anoying because it ruins the flow of the story. And the only reason it's there is because of convinece when acctually they could build on that, try to make the MC wonder where this tecnolegy comes from when everything else is so primitive by comparison and then they could find out about I don't know some ancient civilization and that could tie into the plot somehow. It really dosn't mater what but add something to make it less jaring or just don't add it at all. I don't have spacial rings in my book just-just make it more realistic please authors.
"I will try my best not to fail you, father." Ed said before as he bowed, then took his leave. When he closed the door to his father's room, he took in a deep breath. Leaving the Valley, he had waited for the moment for fifteen years. As he walked back to his court yard, he wondered about what would happen when he leaves the Valley. This Valley was part of the mist. Would this mean he would be returning to his world? All will be clear when he leaves. He could feel energy sing in his bones as he arrived before his court yard. It was large and greatly furnished. He took a seat on his bed and opened his space bag. From it, he took out a sword. The sword shined a hallow of blue when it touched his hand and the blade seemed to sing and buzz. This sword had been doing this a lot for a while now. He wondered what it meant. This was the sword he was given by the oracle when he accepted his quest. It had come with him to this world. That and a piece of Tyraniya's Hair. He had cut a piece without her knowledge while she had slept in Deranox. He was glad he did. - Complain_World2yrReplied to X_Cibula
thank you for being so mature and responding in a helpful way ☺️
- To reach Elemental Warrior Stage 8, One needs to unlock the Psychic Realm and produce Psychic Energy, By using this psychic Energy in combination with their Powerful Refined Bodies, They can fight back against Elemental Mages. - Complain_World2yrCommented
Wait a sec you're telling me that you finished an ENTIRE novel in 2 hours!!? when it takes me days to finish a chapter!? I know this is anoying but could you please check it out no one's read it yet (╥﹏╥) it's called "the black tower"
"I finished the novel in just two or three hours…" - Complain_World2yrCommented
Some hard core fans might have noticed this is a (probably unintentionall) gravity falls reference
"Fight! Fight! Fight!" - Complain_World2yrCommented
Am I the only one that thinks she's insane? I am? Well in that case you're all insane too.
"Steel is craving to be showered by flesh and blood!" - Complain_World2yrReplied to M4L4DD1CT10NCh 34 A Threat
- Complain_World2yrCommented
wow she should get together with Elizabeth "steel is everything we must reuse it!" "flesh is weak steel is eternal"
Han Li was very clear about mankind's attitude toward useless waste. Useless tools would be recycled and re-molded, and, as for discarded materials, they would be either thrown into the trash or thrown into a furnace. - Complain_World2yrCommented
Hey there Author here Fun fact: The reason our MC knows the Lugiarth is a "he" Is because his pincer thingies tips are blue. You see female Lugiarths pinsers tipps are green and male one's are blue. (Also when lugiarths are newborn they start with no color just a pinkish white and slowly get theyre colors over the next year. This means no one knows what gender they are born into until they are one year old. But this is okay because in the Lugiarths languadge there are no "he" or "she" or "they" pronouns just one pronoun for everyone.) What do you mean no one cares about the detailed lore I have thought about making into an entire book? I'm sure everyone here loves reading booring facts for 5 hours right? (:
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LOW MAN
Lie low, man! - Complain_World2yrCommented
Wow this is really well written (: Some things I think you could improve: The part where you explain about the different levels is way too long. I know you probably think that you need it in the story which you do but try to a) make it shorter by cutting out some unessesary bits or b) try and deliver it in a different way. It feels kinda jaring to the story how he goes on a chapter long rant I know it makes sense but you could try to have interact with the story more. You could have him explain it while walking towards the arena and describe that and have shin ask some questions so it feels more like you're still in the story instead of just having information throw at you. Anyway outside of that I think this story's amazing and really well written and from author to author I really hope you can continue writing and improving (: (And by the way I'd really appreciate it if you read my book and told me how I could Improve cause no one's read it yet 😭 It's called "the black tower" So yeah I really hope you continue writing this amazing story 😁
Ch 15 Chapter 15 - Boiling blood - Complain_World2yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5 - Silverwing
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- Complain_World2yrReplied to cuycinCh 1 Stevan Ciracio (Part 1)