just an absolutely horrible translation by a virgin.

honestly, it's not the worst translation in the chapter...

guy thinks the lips are panties, the translation sucks horribly. doesn't realize that panties are underwear, really think they can get anything else right?

they literally built a wall you could see from space to try to defend against Mongols and still lost...

the constant jumping around from 1st to 3rd person isn't something someone who graduated 9th grade should do. Stick to a perspective.

why bother with 2 sword beams that are the same aside from one does more damage? i would think the poison tail spike from rat would be better than the weaker aword beam.

author doesn't understand what a passive skill is. I'm guessing they think all things that give a buff are passives, and anything that does damage or debuff is active. they are wrong, but they don't understand that they are wrong.

no. every hit is supposed to add damage. after 10 seconds of no hits, the effect ends and resets.

no. active skills are ones that you manually activate. passive means you don't activate it at all, it activates on its own automatically. tell me you don't play games without telling me you don't play games 🤦‍♂️

so they go to the empire that literally came to attack them? the same one where his wife was tormented? Then they bring their daughter to be the perfect hostage? so much wrong with the mc and his wife. they aren't good at schemes at all. I wouldn't trust them to plan a party 🤦‍♂️

yeah the author can't seem to keep up with levels and grades of their own novel 🤷‍♂️

America, it is sucker punch or blindside. Only used by cowards though.

Not only that, he said the student attacked him. it was completely self-defense. Not only did he lose the fight he started but lied about how it started.

To author/editor: killed means it is dead. There is no other possible translation for that word. Very few words have multiple meanings in the english language.

you realize that pretty much anything with a frontal lobe has intellect, right? dogs, cats, birds, etc. adult dogs have equivalent intellect to a 2 year old human, on average.

Creativity is in short supply nowadays. If they are creative, they usually have terrible reading/writing skills and/or no knowledge of half of the subjects they add into their stories. some think omega males are above alphas, literally the most ridiculous idea. some think you can use a reverse handled grip on a sword from behind a shield to stab an opponents neck without being a contortionist, some use phrases like "on the other hand" to start every sentence that changes to a new person. At this point, not being creative with the name of the planet is a very minor issue 🤷‍♂️

if he he was dehydrated and knew anything about survival, he could drink the blood of the beasts to keep hydrated 🤦‍♂️

not sure if you actually understand what a reverse grip is, but you generally would never use it with a sword unless stabbing downward. reverse grip with a shield especially makes no sense as you would have to twist your arm in some weird way to strike above the shield. i think you are confusing a standard grip with a reverse grip. reverse is when you hold something with the pointy end going backwards. daggers are used like this sometimes when slashing or deflecting. a sword is too long and heavy to use reverse grip without looking like a complete idiot.

no. adults never have more poisonous bites. literally everyone who knows anything about venomous snakes, spiders, and scorpions knows this. venom sacs work the same way in all of them. The author just didn't do homework, and neither did you.

so he is always facing poisoning and assassination but runs into the dining room without anyone tasting the food for poison, then falls asleep where any of the maids could kill him...?