lescorpio59

i was enjoying the story until the names changed!!! Why?!?!

love the story but the wording is terrible, and the names keep getting mixed up to the point where it gets confusing. got tired of having to re-read the previous lines to confirm which name is correct.

I love the story of the ML & FL as parents and how they carry on to their children. The extra chapters also continue the story smoothly.

The FL was too sacrificial but love the storyline. However, unable to read beyond Chapter 30 onwards due to copyright issues. Dying to know what's gonna happens next [img=gift]

writer glitch?

the last 20 over chapters have paragraphs repeating again and again in the same chapter and its making the story very confusing.

I love the FL character and the storyline is great. I can't wait for the FL to faceslap all those that underestimate her. the ML is also interesting and is such a great backer for the FL. Can't wait for the more chapters!!!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Love this story!! its really entertaining and the language used flows smoothly in every chapter ... I have read quite a number of novels with translations that is soooo bad and it makes the reader more confused. So here is 👍👍👍 for the great job done so far!!