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NessoftheSNES

NessoftheSNES

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HS student. Trying to get into a fine arts uni, but we'll see about that

2020-05-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • NessoftheSNES
    NessoftheSNES10d
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    masterpiece.................................................................................................................................

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    Demon Lord Cthulhu in another world
    Fantasy ยท Acehole
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  • NessoftheSNES
    NessoftheSNES2mth
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    The writing starts off great, but after just a few chapters, the translation is so bad it becomes incomprehensible. I really liked it at first. The story i not that bad, its actually kind of original, and i guess the characters are not bad either, but how could i read a book or a novel with such bad writing. Just take example from a fantasy classic, such as 'the wizard of earthsea', or 'the hobbit' and try to match its style. The way to learn to write good is to read a lot

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  • NessoftheSNES
    NessoftheSNES2mth
    Replied to Smashpillow

    best anime to ever come out. change my mind ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ (i just like birds)

    Karl seemed to understand what Master AI was implying.
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