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Control is 150 meters, but swapping locations is 1000 meters? I'm guessing Control should be 1500
Perhaps I missed something, but if they all had so many points, why didn't they just buy and level bulltor's? The succubus was shocked and scared when she saw one and questioned how mc got it, to which he responded it had to do with him not having a blessing. However, this dude just bought a bulltor himself and said he was "inspired", so I'm a bit lost. Could they all buy them all along? If they could and didn't, why was the succubus so scared of them?
Can't spirit magic bypass dimensional sealing?
He already told her this.
Right, Zemin shared records with Lilith, which is how he knew the method would work and what he told the others. Then, he tried to share it with Yijun and failed. He told the others that he accepted Yijun's theory that soul power difference could cause failure after that. He changed his mind after Yijun failed to share the record with him. By telling the others that he learned from doing it with Lily first and that he later accepted the soul power theory, he basically admitted that the soul power problem wouldn't have been present with Lily; otherwise he wouldn't have accepted the theory. If Lily was a weak maid like everyone sees her, Zemin wouldn't be able to share records with her for the theory to hold.
I only realized it as a reader that knew about Lilith's power, but if those intelligent college kids put some thought behind his words, he basically implied Lily has a strong soul power. He said he had confirmed that the method worked by sharing records with Lily. He also said that he previously accepted the theory that a difference in soul power could cause rejection, and only changed his mind at this failure. I wonder if any of them will put it together, or if it'll slip past them.
Not sure why MC wouldn't include red eyes in the information given to the public
"Meanwhile, spirit power is the measure of one's talent in weaving the elemental energy of the universe. It is measured by three categories: spirit strength, spirit control and spirit capacity. Increasing spirit power will be everybody's main task and it won't be easy. Only when a person breaks through spirit power 30 will be the time anyone of you will be able to use basic elements and reach rank 2 acolyte." Why does it say Rank 3 Magician when the other novel says 30 spirit power is at rank 2 Acolyte
I just can't understand why he hasn't even used partial transformation.
Meanwhile, if he used his brain and walked with his high-level roommates he'd be completely safe.
Met*
But he's called Lith brother before. I think it's an author's mistake.
Marcus thought* not marcel
at any risk/danger*
It's an excellent story. It's probably a bit premature to rank the update consistency yet, as this review is done with only five chapters out. However, the chapters are exceptionally long by webnovel standards. With over 3000 words per chapter, each one is roughly equivalent to three chapters that I'm used to on this site. That is to say, the initial release was essentially 15 chapters with a promise of more to come. Personally, I really enjoy the dialogue. I find it very realistic for the age group, with an appropriate balance of comedy and seriousness. Although I'm not certain what will happen, there appears to be a lot of foreshadowing and world building, which I very much enjoy. The subtle hints about the MC's powers before they manifested were really well placed. All in all, I hope this story picks up more traction so that the author will publish more.
Four hundred thousand* Not forty thousand
Just to be clear, isn't this expansion the thing the game developers told Roland and Schuck to avoid due to having too much data in one place? Or was that something else?
Author, you need to work on keeping your gender pronouns consistent. You keep switching between he/him and she/her. 'ask him anything' 'She's the one' At this point, the assassin's *** isn't even clear. Otherwise, excellent story.