The story plot is good and have consistency and flow of the story is smooth From the start. A bit of mystery from the start with Hou You being also rebirth .

I have patiently read the whole story and spent loads of money on it but still ok, only thing towards the end so many questions arises like “what happen to…” but overall gives fullmarks 👍

Good story line and flow of the story is good. ot also give background information or flashbacks on certain events happening. Characters, female lead and male lead are good.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

From start to finish of the story, I have enjoyed it with the unbelievable fantasy and the realistic events. The fluidity of the sequences in the story makes it enjoyable and interesting to read.

From start to the current chapter the story flow with consistency . Although some of the characters seems not relevant at start but justification was obvious at a later part of the story.

How come the chapters are getting shorter Annnnnnnd shorter although I am giving credit to the author, the story is getting exciting as it progress 👍😘

How about publishing the Complete Novel for a price, the anticipation is killing me😩😩😩

The story is so far interesting and captivating that pulls you to keep on reading and you feel frustrated with few chapter updates everyday. I like the female lead and warming up towards the male lead 👍👍👍👍

Where can you find a husband like this one???😘😘😘👌

Flying pillows????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Oops 🙀🙀🙀😂😂😂😂

😂😂😂hilarious 👍👍👍

So far the story is interesting and urge you to read on 👍👍👍👍👍🙈👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👏👏 Still wondering Why the male lead of the story is against the female lead

The story feels like it’s starting in the middle to events and it leaves me asking why what when and pulls you to read on to find out the answers.

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Translation is very good and the flow of the story plot is also fluid and consistent , background back story of the topic on each chapters is also excellent.

Interesting but mostly reborn story plot starts with weak female lead the reborn to revenge and awesomeness