Dropped at chap35. Nothing new for an HP fanfic, and there's no problem with that. The real issue is: - Short chapters - MC with no emotions - A strange concept of a 'villain' - The novel feels more like a summary The author has some good ideas, such as testing the plot. However, it's never developed further; it always feels like a summary.

I would go with 10 here, i think its the only one that you cant lvl up naturally.

I love the interaction between then, but sometimes it feels weird, i don't know... each one of then always has something say, and i think this is a constant thru the whole novel, it doesn't feel natural to me.

Is it just me or that whole "confession" in front of their friends was too awkward?

From what i read it was ok, not a genius with 300QI, but not an potato either. So for me intelligent is a good word.

I think Leylin is more indifferent then cruller, he's just cruel bc of the world he lives in, its a dog eat dog world, here is a soft world, and as a mentioned, "GOOD" boy.

Probably the best novel I've read on this site! This novel is really something else... I've finished the 282chs in 4 days.. I loved the "status" in the end of every chapter! Keep the good work author!!

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Its the first fanfic that a read with a mix of worlds.. But i was thinking about it, even on the MCU movies they didn't mix the history at first... that would be a mess, to much information, to much to explain... and they are from the same world, now imagine HP x MCU x WMW... think about the dump of information. Maybe he could throw something on the time skips, but too much would be a mess..

A good read until now (chap 93). Its really Leylin on HP world, a power hunger GOOD boy. MC is intelligent and have the AI chip, so the growth of power is really smooth and simple. There's no romance tag, so do not expect that. There's almost no interaction or plot with his friends, which for me is really bad, the author just time skip where could be something. I'm not a big fan of HP, so for me the canon history don't change to much for a fanfic. Marvel is in there, but that's it. Recommended for fans of WMW, fans of HP not so much( probably will think is boring)...

haha, what word could i'v used in this case? my engrishu is really limited! maybe common people right?

must be that, bc does not make any sense in trying to recruit him...

Yeah, but he could have run even before Igor showed up, i know that you needed this to develop the history, but the MC seems so smart, probing, making schemes, planing what he's doing... but out of the blue he decides to attack some sect disciples like that woudn't bring him problems. But anyway, loving the novel, thanks and keep the good work!

wtf just happen on those past chapters? mc was looking so smart and mature until now... he could just run, because not even an earth grade could catch him right? this was really necessary? im hoping that the novel dont go down like this..

i think shouldn't be seen like that, i mean, if we compare with drugs, using to health related problems is ok, using for recreation isnt. and they dont seens to have an predominant religion, that i think would impose some ideals like "*** is only a mean for reproduction". in a dog eat dog world wheres having *** makes you stronger, only dumb ones wouldnt practice dual cultivation. maybe they would even make dual cultivation a secret, imagine all the plebs getting stronger without restriction.

This system getting life like is getting in my nerves.. soon will be like "Lvl up or ill die in 3 days!"

maybe, but i think it's about war, remember those elves? they need stronger people, and need fast...

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Wow, take it easy man, he's just a kid, not a super duper programmer..

lame