tatekim

This is a well-constructed fanfic. The author has a goal, and instead of adding shit up, he omits things that would need too much time to explain, like where are Hermione and Ron? Smut is nicely done and has a good amount. The character design is good; It's focused on a few characters. Harry is likable in my opinion. He's not edgy, nor is he "Harry" - he fluctuates between the two. The girls are okay. Nothing much is said about the others, as I said, it is really focused on Harry and the girls. Updates are slow, but it's a fanfic, so that's ok in my book. As for the world background... for someone who reads a lot of HP-FF, you can fill some blank spaces with your imagination, and that's ok, but the author introduces some things that left me wanting more. And for that, I do not recommend this for someone who's not a veteran in HP-FF.

I found the story promising, but the character development was weak. The author's tendency to jump from one event to the next, without delving into the characters' experiences, made the fanfic feel shallow. Hence, the three-star rating.

I can have some idea where the story goes, but my time reading on this site showed me that 90% of the authors just put tags and name titles to get more views, or the author has a different concept of the word. How many harem stories did you read that which the MC didn't even have relationship with two women?

AI generated, badly edited, rushed, no character development, short chapters. Realy not worth it ...........................................

The story is quite refreshing but it feels like the MC is bipolar or something like that, there's a point where he thinks he is a psychopath, so maybe this was intended but it became difficult to be relatable. But the real problem here is what happens in most novels; the author has a good idea. Presents a goal that we can see would take a while to accomplish, or at least we can expect a good plot from it, and then he jumps to another fucking world? The probability of seeing the end of that or at least some good content is really low. Too much to handle, too much to explain. Where you could have time to develop what was already presented, he just goes for a new world...

This is a generic Naruto isekai fanfic: - The MC has some background before reincarnation, that's cool. - The MC is OP in the sense of learning (as per background) but lacks experience, so he does not always win. - Interactions with other characters are shallow. Minato, Kushina and Tsunade have some plot but everything else is like a checklist of, meet-and-learn secret techniques. - The famous 5-year-old with a shredded body acting like a man. - MC is a powerhouse in the making but doesn't want to change the plot. He has "a plan"; that's why I said it's a generic fanfic, he wants to be a key character as if that wouldn't change everything.... In the end, for me, this is a cherry-picking of things the author wants without changing too much of the original plot.

Dropped at chap35. Nothing new for an HP fanfic, and there's no problem with that. The real issue is: - Short chapters - MC with no emotions - A strange concept of a 'villain' - The novel feels more like a summary The author has some good ideas, such as testing the plot. However, it's never developed further; it always feels like a summary.

I would go with 10 here, i think its the only one that you cant lvl up naturally.

I love the interaction between then, but sometimes it feels weird, i don't know... each one of then always has something say, and i think this is a constant thru the whole novel, it doesn't feel natural to me.

Is it just me or that whole "confession" in front of their friends was too awkward?