was enjoying the story till chapter 33 , idk why but i felt like I didn't enjoy that part but good story so far I'll try to see if I can skim through a few chapters to get to when they are a litte more grown up

love the writing only thing is wish there were more chapters to read caught up in like 3 days my favourite kingdom building so far thank you author!

so is Braydon a good swordsman? or hes just better than average? by the way 5 chapters in I'm loving the story

love the story so far hope you keep writing bro!!!

good luck !!who you got on Sunday arsenal vs spurs

nice chapter just wondering y he calls his grandma Samantha instead of grandma?

nice chapter

hope your feeling well , take your time and come back stronger

hope you keep updating regularly love the sports novels nice to finally see a football (Soccer) novel that has nice grammar love to see you keep updating the story man love it so far , so is the main character gonna join gunners fc they might need a creative attacking midfielder ? anyways keep it up and hoping you release more chapters quicker !!

love sports novels love the story so far hope you keep on churning the chapters can't wait for the next chapter!!