Niakie
Reading since age 3, had to be grounded from books, still making time to read in a busy schedule.
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Niakie3yrCommentedhow long until that skin is going to be exposed on a shoot? that stuff doesn't fade quickly!
Her body exposed, Alexander leaned forward and placed soft, wet, kisses on Sabrina's skin, sending her tingling sensations all over her body. He left reddish colored love bites on her white skin.- Niakie3yrCommented
but also, who wears a bra to bed?
"Relax baby," Alexander whispered. He slowly removed Sabrina's top, leaving her nothing but her undergarment. - Niakie3yrCommented
I imagine that the shirt is simply open and her skin is exposed... with only undergarments left as a covering
"Relax baby," Alexander whispered. He slowly removed Sabrina's top, leaving her nothing but her undergarment. - Niakie3yrCommented
soft manly moans 😂😂😂 oh so macho! don't want to appear feminine!
Without prior notice, Sabrina started a trail of kisses on Alexander's body. Starting from his neck to his shoulders, then to his bare chest, Alexander couldn't help it but let out soft manly moans. - Niakie3yrCommented
ahead *of schedule
"As you all know, our actors and actresses are very skilled and professional. And because of them, we are ahead of our calendar," Julian looked at them with a smile on his face, "Therefore I'm giving everyone a 2 day break!" - Niakie3yrCommented
a more common phrase would be *'give yourselves a round of applause', instead of 'let's clap for ourselves'
"Thank you for the great job today, let's clap for ourselves," Julian said and everybody clapped. - Niakie3yrCommented
perfectly, *tears fell down or *drops of tears fell down or *teardrops fell down
Portraying the emotions of the scene perfectly, drop of tears fell down from Sabrina's eyes as she kissed Alexander. - Niakie3yrCommented
*Jaden grew suspicious... how it's currently written, it's as if his underlings are suspicious of him/don't trust him
The lead characters are inside Jaden's bedroom. They were arguing about Hanna's real motive about joining the rebellion group. Brenda, Jessica's character, tipped Jaden about Hannah being a secret agent for the country. Suspicion grew on Jaden which eventually led to a quarrel, but to prove her love and innocence, Hannah decided to sleep with Jaden. - Niakie3yrCommented
wait, is it Hannah or Hanna? It's a name, it should be consistent.
The lead characters are inside Jaden's bedroom. They were arguing about Hanna's real motive about joining the rebellion group. Brenda, Jessica's character, tipped Jaden about Hannah being a secret agent for the country. Suspicion grew on Jaden which eventually led to a quarrel, but to prove her love and innocence, Hannah decided to sleep with Jaden. - Niakie3yrCommented
snapping *back to reality
Snapping out in reality, Sabrina immediately realized what she was doing. She stood up from her seat and bowed, "I'm sorry," she apologized, "Let's do it again," Sabrina said. - Niakie3yrCommented
WTH?!! She's a TERRIBLE movie star manager! Grey should not be the one correcting her!
"I'm sorry," Kenzie apologised, "I got too excited," she giggled. - Niakie3yrCommented
*I was more ..... than you, when I first
"Is Sir Alexander," a voice suddenly said, "Yeah, I'm more surprised than you were when I first found out." - Niakie3yrCommented
Wow, Kenzie is dense! Especially for someone who's a manager! She was literally told everything! She's being quite obtuse!
"Those two are acting really weird," she said. She just shrugged and started to tidy Sabrina's things. - Niakie3yrCommented
*self-conscious
"Happy of course," Kenzie answered, "But kinda conscious at the same time," she added. - Niakie3yrCommented
She didn't tell her? Oh goodness!
"Never mind, you'll see him later," Sabrina said, "I'll go get my make-up done now," she tapped Kenzie's shoulder then walked towards the make-up artist to prepare. - Niakie3yrCommented
Omg, running after her! 😂😂😂
"Ride with Grey, I'll drive Sabrina," Alexander said then ran after Sabrina immediately. - Niakie3yrCommented
....he can't keep doing this throughout her career, he's going to have to get over this or she'll have to quit being an actress.
"Hello my Hanna Davis," Alexander smiled at her playfully. - Niakie3yrCommented
😉😂
"Hmm…" Alexander rubbed his chin, "Call me baby first and I'll tell you," he smiled at her. - Niakie3yrCommented
"nursing home for criminal elders" I've never heard of such a thing! It makes sense, but it's still foreign to me.
"You don't have to Uncle. She has done something that caused her what she's experiencing now. It broke me, yes, but it was for the best," Sabrina answered, "I'm thankful that you decided to send her to a nursing home for criminal elders rather than in jail," she said. - Niakie3yrCommented
waved her *hands
Sabrina waved her wands, "It's nothing Uncle, I was happy to help," she said.