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haywoody14141mthCommentedA system with such extreme punishments is the reason why alot of people hate systems as it just turns the MC into a slave to system without any free will.
<Defeat is not cultured, so if the system judges that the host failed to protect one that he cares for, he will be executed by the system—note that the system's criteria may not necessarily align with the host's views>- haywoody14141mthCommented
I you want to get ahead of people negatively commenting on actions happening in the story do it in the comments instead of breaking up the story, it really interferes with the flow of the story.
Some may ask, "At what point did this happen?", "The author didn't mention any of this, I'll stop reading", but the reason for this is simple, yesterday, when they heard about the existence of Sayaka, Haru, Sena, Aki and the other Haru, they became very jealous, envy ran through their bodies as if it were a stream of water and, after consulting with their pillow, they decided that the reason for this jealousy and envy was because, without a doubt, they had fallen in love with Haruto. - haywoody14141mthReplied to Arya_Hafiz_SaputraCh 369 Chapter 367: Marine's Surprise!
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She has a breeding system her equipment should not be less than average. It should either evolve to let her upgrade or even allow her to take properties from other partners she has been with.
Watching as Renna 'took' my place and started to moan as I teased her boobs, my penis throbbed with even more want despite having just cum a few moments before, the sensitivity fading quicker and quicker as my body craved only the pleasure and nothing else, even if the average sized appendage - compared to Rhefia, Sari, Shelur and all the other futa's I had been with, anyways - was still tingling in ways that traveled up my spine and into my brain. - haywoody14142mthCommented
She has been here no more than 2 weeks and is supposedly quite smart as she thinks, but is already forgetting things that she is studying.
I soon research and understand better, I had read it and had forgotten, it turns out that the Entity of Hate is also known as the Entity of Ferocity! - haywoody14142mthCommented
This overconfidence that she is somehow the strongest is just weird, it happened when she even thought she was stronger than her mom when she first went hunting.
Thea stumbled, shocked by what she was seeing. - haywoody14142mthCommented
This does not make any sense as you already had her noticing the hiding wolf long before Mia ever started attacking the wolves.
"Don't worry, I was ready to act if something would have happened. You need to make better use of your map." Lily said while embracing Thea. - haywoody14142mthReplied to SleepnSweets
Except that you mentioned before that her mom constantly makes sure she does not get overconfident and complacent.
Before Thea could even do anything, it bit down and Mia went, *poof*, her body disappeared in a smoke, only to reappear on top of the wolf where she lodged her dagger in its spine, although Mia had stabbed with all her might, it wasn't enough to do the damage she wished to deal, so before the wolf had even comprehend what happened, Mia had repositioned herself and was now standing on the wolfs neck as she stomped down with her foot onto the dagger, digging it deeper until she did the damage she was looking for. - haywoody14142mthCommented
I really like that she is aware that this skill is not a good fit for her and only to be used as a last resort.
If I had this skill back then, I could have 'beaten' Yiksa when she forced herself inside me, and things might have turned out different with this skill... it was a nice insurance policy, and hopefully one I would never need to use. - haywoody14142mthCommented
This felt like it came out of nowhere especially after the last chapter, making it feel like she only begrudgingly uses her system and is mad at it. Which does not match with the way she has talked about her system up to this point. It was just jarring reading taking me out of the story.
I felt like kicking my feet as I stared at the huge jump in levels I had ignored until now, feeling slightly petulant as I wanted to continue to ignore them and not worry about dealing with it, but... - haywoody14142mthCommented
It may not grow dull for her wives but it could grow dull for the readers.
Both of my wives made it clear that they yearned for release alongside me, and I loved that I was able to give them that release without much effort on my part; sometimes I felt a tad worried that my 'passivity' in our lovemaking sessions would grow dull for them, but it seemed that I was forgetting that they were both very 'aggressive' and willing to claim what they wanted. - haywoody14142mthCommented
What about her skill to strengthen her partners that she has given to each of her children, I do not recall you mentioning it ever procing. And with how active they are it should have procced many times by now making them all quite a bit stronger as it only takes 14 times to double their stats at 5%.
People have mentioned a skill that Astra picked up skill a long time ago that would allow her to use her womb freely without worrying about pregnancy; I have no idea how I forgot to add it to my notes, hence why it hasn't been used lol. - haywoody14141yrReplied to Aiden_Haust
It was already mentioned that there will be a profession to make bullets as the mc thought about aquiring it when he was buying bullets.
Zhang Shan did not bother about what race the Titan celestial race was. He only heard that it was a divine weapon and a flintlock. These were enough. - haywoody14141yrReplied to GENTLE_RAIN
The way I have interpreted it so far is that while money is important in the new world, Power is what truly moves the world. And from what has been mentioned about the plans with the money he needs all are to provide himself with a better life in the real world not to further his power in COVENANT. Where if he were to spend some of this time increasing his power that would bring wealth along with it.
Ch 144 Secret Affair - haywoody14141yrCommentedCh 50 Plot time