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Just a Mischievous B*stard... Maybe. "It might be contradicting... But it held some truth within.."
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Aight... I'll start my ranting... Dude became god(mf even have a omnipotence), have tons of harem, lived long enough than those foreigner floaties on the void... For some reason reincarnated/reborn to new identity... Technically speaking it's still himself so he should inherit the trait of his predecessor.. yet still have a problem with relationship... Classic.
That remind me... You genben otto.... So now it's she... And that means... technically... She could attain Valkyrie power?(that lifespan bs? Well it's otto were talking about... And her goal is almost finished).... Wouldn't it better to buff her since Bianka got a better mentor?... Also the original story has thrown awry with FC status that still alive and have portion of the world as their domain...
Core of Void could just literally tearing a space... Imagine you just opened a tear within enemy body then closed it(They never used it in-game though..)... It's the biggest cheat actually compared to other Cores... elemental is meh...
Fast paced execution is messed up... I'll be honest here... The characters are lack of personality... It's more like an RPG games NPC than a novel cast.. The interaction is bit forced.. other than that I didn't see any problem (Even of there's a few grammar error at least the capital is well displayed..)
Meh... Life is already rigged since it's was started....