Daoistsynthesis
except for a few major exceptions, I don't like to read actual books. Manga and other forms of writing are more my style.
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Daoistsynthesis1yrCommentedCh 346 A Morning With The Girls- Daoistsynthesis1yrCommentedCh 23 Chapter 23
- Daoistsynthesis1yrCommentedCh 63 The Chest
- Daoistsynthesis1yrCommentedCh 53 It Is Okay
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so the main flow of the "story" is kind of uninteresting. The mc has to do this an has to do that, well that's boring. How is there going to be meaningful development if she has to do certain things. She has no free will in the story, the plot is being forced forward not moved naturally. No self awareness, no personality, no sympathy, no character. Clicked for good yuri but yuri needs story to be good. since it's so early an theres still so much left I'm going to hold some cards for later chapters. I'm hoping it will get better.
Ch 12 12: Calming the heat down - Daoistsynthesis1yrPosted
first things first I like all the characters. the development is a little fast an not really a fan of some of the background plots going on. like other people being able to get powers as well. Or the jumping back an forth between game an reality. I feel the story might would have flowed easier if it were a mom daughter isekai. I guess that would have taken some uniqueness away too. however all in all I really like it. an though not listed my praises out weight my dislikes. keep up the work. P.S yuri is 10/10
- Daoistsynthesis1yrCommentedCh 100 Spanking A Haughty Young Master