(His) brain - you used the female version

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her=his she=he [common translation mistakes]

You started calling Snowball a boy here.

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I decided to take a break from marvel verse stories after reading to chapter 10 since the 2nd time I woke up today I thought (oh it's cloudy if it rains II'llneed to spray the windows to chase away that sentient white mold parasite. wait ...WHAT )

done not down

In this paragraph she is proper word.

in comparison to Pokémon it's like a bulbasaur in fox form and a trainer with arura and the special ability observe. however world building on the social/work structures are clearly defined

good luck 👍

I very much like this story. If you are using Google translate then you might want to find some one for help editing. Your work has improved greatly overall.

MC is sometimes randomly referred to as female, so double check gender pronouns

switch human speech to italics to distinguish between main and side characters

the censored words in the first few chapters should be swapped with drink or bite

watch should be wench or witch

I hope you stay healthy. Taking a break is fine I love this story but it is not worth risking your health. hopefully the chaos settles in 2 to 4 weeks if quality precautions are taken. remember to have your own personal hand sanitizer in the car and possible some paper towels .also keep note of what and when you ate so you know if you're in need of fruit or vegetables of some sort.

talent, or knowledge Shin knew he was capable of catching up. Even though it was going slowly today he saw the gap their skills was narrowing.

ever since Jennifer's betrayal Izuku was beginning to

safe/sade