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gursimran_singh3yrReplied toI am grateful that you seem to like this story . Continue reading more and I will try to use your ideas in future as well .
" Have you calmed down now ? " Raven asked calmly while throwing the empty bottle outside the cave .- gursimran_singh3yrReplied to AEON_
Well I too found my own novel boring thus dropped it
after walking for about 30 minutes ren finaly reached home and immediately dashed towards the first floor which was reinforced by many kinds of seals of D and C rank . he just creates too many seals with his shadow clones everyday so it wont hurt to reinforce his room with them . besides the materials are cheap as the low rank seals dont require special materials like beast blood , DNA etc . ren has a steady income from his books which people are practically crazy about ( adults including ladies) now all over the world . ren had severely underestimated the low standards of literature in this world but it's not a bad thing anyway as he is rich anyway .. - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to KarmaKalo
Thanks for good comments . Actually you are the first one to mention any comments . Thanks to you I can now feel that there are some people reading this book out there because the reading count is too low even compared to my most trash fanfiction that I posted in the past . Anyway continue reading and posting some comments in the future
- gursimran_singh3yrReplied to Poolitzer
I'm sorry but my vocabulary is too weak . I will try to learn new words then
ren casually knocked 4 of them out with quick chop at their back neck as they have gone through much already and seen some things that they didnt need to aka sharingan . ren had no choice but to erase his students and the last enemy's memories about his sharingan now . fortunately it was not difficult for him to do so as implanting fake memories is the truly difficult shit . - gursimran_singh3yrCommented
13 now and 170 something cm height because of bloodline tempering and high metabolism due to extreme training with weight seal and lots of food . well I dont know whether my explanation can be right or not but you can just say that mc is abnormal enough already with crazy prowess.
Ch 51 first bloodline target during war .. - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to lightning_devil
it was during 3rd great war way far in future from current timeline in my story . I dont plan to let him die anyway
well honestly ren doesn't really want to awaken eternal mangekyo sharingan if he has to kill or witness death of his close friend who is currently only dai . ren thinks that maybe he wont succeed in awakening eternal mangekyo sharingan only by using powerful genjutsu to see fake death of dai because his bloodline is purer and powerful . well it's the story of far future anyway .. - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to Afsoares
you are absolutely right
still ren decided not think much about it as he knew that humans could live only a short life and it was fated . ren decided to focus on becoming stronger now as he knew that there were some powers which could revive the dead and ren would use them to revive mito in future . - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to crusher
I'm sorry I didnt understand anything from this particular comment . so please explain one more time .. English is not my first language not even second so I'm really weak in this shit ..
this drama simply happened because ren decode to break his secret to dai as he knows that dai wont betray him or sell him to others . the secret was of course sharingan . after seeing the red eyes of ren dai only sent a thumbs up to ren and congratulated him from the bottom his heart . dai didnt even try to ask ren about the reasons like are you a secret uchiha or something! this honest and bold friendship warmed ren's cold heart because he had almost no friends on earth much less a friend like dai whom he can entrust his life with . so both of them got emotional and shouted and hugged each other in an exaggerated show of youthful passion ! - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to crusher
you know that marines who have surpassed human limits in one piece can start practicing soru right? that's supposedly a 1000 kg strenght . and dai has already surpassed it somewhat in my opinion by extreme training and nourishing body cells with chakra . as for why mc and dai can use soru easily now ? simple because the power of technique will automatically increase with strenght but control over technique is only based on talent which in my opinion dai has surpassed every other taijutsu expert .
both taijutsu maniacs had smiles on their faces the whole time while they exchanged more than 3 blows every second. that's right they were using soru for extreme speed and their bodies have become powerful now . but if you look at dai's legs then you can see that his leg muscles have become visibly bigger and looked buffer than before . this was intentionally trained because ren and dai discovered that after they reach advanced proficiency in soru, they were not advancing any further even after many days of practice. - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to ZeoLuca
maybe because when he got the cheat then basically some plot armour was already confirmed .
I'm really interested in this young child and what he wants . 3 days ago I recieved a report that someone was inquiring about the uzumaki compound but I didnt bother investigating anything. since then this child comes everyday and just stands outside the main door for an hour looking inside with eyes filled with curiosity . let's meet him as I cannot shake off the feeling that this child is special . - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to glmo11
you can think like his own chakra duplicates infinitely . well if I make him strong like kaguya or whatever then there are only 4or5 chapters needed to end this story .
the small piece of paper got cut into two halves . one cut side burned and other just disintegrated into thin air . ren smiled in satisfaction as he confirmed that he has 3 affinities . the paper got cut means wind , burn means of course fire and paper disappearing means innate yin . ren's guesses turned right and he even has wind affinity which he is somewhat knowledgeable about . - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to glmo11
maybe you should be the one to write fics as I dont pay attention to small details . I think your story will be much more convincing so please do write and inform me when releasing chapters .
I now only know how to use substitution jutsu , clone jutsu and transformation jutsu because all the experience of this body was fused with me . this chakra is really a mysterious thing . when I concentrate, I can see chakra network inside my body and a small blue fire orb which is my chakra now. - gursimran_singh3yrReplied to DiperZ
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- gursimran_singh3yrReplied to Akshay007
I dont know as I only wrote the money value on some broken logic ..
ren had purchase the cheapest eye lenses from a pharmacy shop which still cost him 240000 ryo though . anyway this purchase was necessary as ren had to hide his sharingan from others while having it activated all day . the reason why ren was content with the most cheapest lenses was simple. he lived in the civilian market area where ninja rarely come and for the training ground ren uses quickest routes to travel where almost nobody can encounter him . so these lenses which could hide his sharingan from normal genin at best were more than useful for him .