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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS1yr
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    Why do you keep doing this to me?

    Ch 32 This Novel Is Currently On Pause
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS1yr
    Commented

    What's going on? You should keep writing, you've got people rooting for you mate.

    Ch 31 Wrath of the Storm God and the Nature Goddess
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    [REDACTED] mate. I mean, I can't blame the Hobgoblins, but it really seems like they won't be able to get out without a deus ex machina. I hope you don't fridge Ariel.

    Ch 27 Torture Chamber (1)
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    The fight scene in this chapter was much easier to imagine

    Ch 22 More Goblins (2)
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    Remember his stealth skill

    He slowly opened the door and was about to look inside, but he heard a noise that he would later recognize as the singular noise that changed his life forever...
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    I do like how you're partially implying, at least with the title, that their relationship is somewhat affected by their divinities

    Ch 23 Ouranos and Gaea Reincarnation
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    He probably could have used his Mana sense to find her

    After a minute of not being able to find her he started worrying.
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    I feel ambivalent, it was probably pretty good, but it's hard to imagine

    Ch 21 More Goblins (1)
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    He probably could have used his air

    Ky just had to jump and reach up to grab onto the first branch.
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Replied to Ramirys

    What is WSA?

    Ch 24 *IMPORTANT PLEASE READ*
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Replied to Ramirys

    Could you share it with me on Google Docs?

    Ch 24 *IMPORTANT PLEASE READ*
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    Odin?

    Before you read this chapter, try to guess who "Sky Daddy" is just based off of the chapter name and the foreshadowing. I would like to see your guesses lol.
    Wrath of the Storm God
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    I like your writing. If you would like a proofreader and wouldn't mind a bit of a delay, I'll volunteer.

    Ch 24 *IMPORTANT PLEASE READ*
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    And put DareBee training in instead Though I guess it would be "Daring Bee"

    "Yeah, they really should take that out." Sarah agreed.
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    Maybe draw a general map, it's kinda hard to envision

    The humans occupied the largest space in the middle of the continent that stretched from north the south.
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    I need to remember this stuff for starting to work out more seriously.

    "After those few weeks of meaningless training, they give them real routines. The One Slap Man training is extremely inefficient for the body. You do not workout your muscles enough to combat the long running session. By the time you're done running you have burned off the efforts of the previous strength training."
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail
  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    I liked the fight scene, you described everything well, just maybe too much detail

    Ch 6 Brotherly Fight
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    I really like this

    So, sadly for the two boys there was no clear winner, except for the God of Bruises.
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
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  • PropangandaDS
    PropangandaDS2yr
    Commented

    Pluto inheritor?

    "I'm not an edgelord… Anyway, the graveyard was filled with super dark smoke, it was really weird. I expected zombies to start crawling out of the ground or something but luckily, they didn't. Oh, and there were diamonds, sapphires, and rubies hidden in the dirt everywhere."
    Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
    Fantasy · Ramirys
    detail