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Casualperv

Casualperv

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I'm a casual pervert but an amazing writer. I think.

2020-04-30 JoinedGlobal
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  • Casualperv
    Casualperv2yr
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    What is happening to your grammar?!

    That's were it matters, the more kills the more points you have, the points though wont win you the hunt, you would at least be given a head start, the ones with the highest points would get an extra lead in the next round, not only that the points you gain could be used to buy stuff from the school, things to improve your power
    altalt
    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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  • Casualperv
    Casualperv2yr
    Commented

    *know

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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  • Casualperv
    Casualperv2yr
    Commented

    I think the word 'sea' is used a bit too many times :D

    The sound of waves rippling was heard, the smell of the sea weaved through the rippling sea, the screams of dangerous sea monsters could be heard, up above the sea, a floating object could be seen
    altalt
    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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