Belleish
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Belleish1yrCommentedFortunately, he did not offend her too badly just now. Otherwise, it would be difficult to clean up the mess.- Belleish1yrCommented
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He had to rely on medicine to sleep for five, six hours.detailAfter Breaking Off My Marriage, I Became A Powerful Minister's TreasureHistory · Blue White Plaids - Belleish2yrCommented
burn them
Shi Qingluo had no interest in snatching them back, she even despised them.detailAfter Breaking Off My Marriage, I Became A Powerful Minister's TreasureHistory · Blue White Plaids - Belleish2yrCommented
* "remarks"
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* "with whom to form a family" rather than "whom to form a family with"
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* "the thick braid is leaned on my back, reaching my waist and passing it..." isn't quite right either. "the thick braid rests against my back, just passing my waist" would be better
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* "once finished to arrange my..." isn't quite right "once she finished arranging my..." would probs be better
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giving him a complex about his writing
«His Gs are weird, so he's trying not to write any.» - Belleish2yrCommented
you mean he might get recognised as king
«Be ready with clothes for a couple of days. We'll buy everything on the way as soon as we get out of Mavale. The capital is dangerous: we might get recognised.» - Belleish2yrCommented
why does this seem like a tracking device
He locks a small bracelet around my wrist. - Belleish2yrCommented
he kidnaps you and you don't know what he did to offend you
«I... don't know,» I reply. «It's just that he treats me like an object.» - Belleish2yrCommented
what do you think, mate
«What made you so angry? What did he do that annoyed you to such a degree?» - Belleish2yrReplied to xiaohai_23
what about "my goodness"? it can be used as an exclamation in a similar way
Then, I realise that calling him like this is like accepting his courtship. As if he did anything to woo me, for goodness. - Belleish2yrCommented
* "I can't take my eyes off you" rather than "get"
«It's the protocol,» Ignis explains. «I can't get my eyes off you. In case you show any sign of poisoning, I need to intervene.» - Belleish2yrCommented
* the expression is "for goodness sake"
Then, I realise that calling him like this is like accepting his courtship. As if he did anything to woo me, for goodness. - Belleish2yrCommentedRegardless, was I that obvious? Well, he won't be able to stop me. Staying here, and getting exposed for who I am, means death as well, so I better place my bet where I do have some chance.
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i wounder whether she would have been allowed out before the wedding
However, this day feels less boring than yesterday. Even though I haven't changed my mind about marrying the King, I feel as if he isn't as tyrannic as I've initially assumed. - Belleish2yrCommented
* "agreed to help me" rather than "accepted to help me"
I still can't believe Ignis accepted to help me. - Belleish2yrCommented
* "got along" rather than "went along"
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* "it's not like many have such a vivid colour of hair" isn't quite right "it's not like many people have such a vivid hair colour" or "it's not like many people have such vividly coloured hair" would be better
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