Belleish

mood

burn them

* "remarks"

* "with whom to form a family" rather than "whom to form a family with"

* "the thick braid is leaned on my back, reaching my waist and passing it..." isn't quite right either. "the thick braid rests against my back, just passing my waist" would be better

* "once finished to arrange my..." isn't quite right "once she finished arranging my..." would probs be better

giving him a complex about his writing

you mean he might get recognised as king

why does this seem like a tracking device