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UndeadPheasant6mthReplied to SeraphWeddexcept all he had to do was store the gun in his space ring, if he didn't have the the space ring, he could've placed the gun within the storage space when he grabbed the gun, the actual advent of the weaker version of thunderclap doesnt play into this. and you can't really use the excuse, well hes'sstill developing, since you know, you gave a good portion of the experience of thousands of years worth of deaths from combat to utilize.
As I did, Noir managed to stealthily creep a tentacle nearby, making it go and nab the gun from my side.- UndeadPheasant11mthCommented
you can remove the 'the's from behind Old Stone, since Old Stone is a pronoun you don't need to put "the Old Stone"
"Good Morning. And yes, I will be leaving soon. However, I have to resolve some issues before leaving the Old Stone," Minos nodded as he started to put on his clothes. - UndeadPheasant1yrCommented
trance not trans
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pincer not piecer
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I don't know where you heard that from, for the minimum wage where I'm at, that's and hour and a half of it, but in some areas, including mine until recently, it would take two hours of work to make 15 dollars
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don't forget the *
The poor Snorlax tried to put up some resistance by activating their sonic skills or trying to catch the cruel human that kept killing them even though they just wanted to sleep in peace. Unfortunately, their movements were slow and their giant belly hindered the, therefore, in less than five minutes all the sn*rlax running in a northerly direction were hunted down. - UndeadPheasant1yrCommented
Water cannot be used to put out oil fires, sand, dirt, or possibly magic would be the only way to put out oil fires in the era this story takes place in.
Water might be the best to put out fires in such an era but with a scarce supply of it, no one would be stupid enough to waste it and since sand can do just the same then why not make use of it. The failure of the battering rams served as a reminder to Khao'khen that even though he was a good or maybe even great commander in his era but in such a period that nuclear bombs and automatic rifles didn't exist and a world where fantasy creatures and magic existed, he still had a lot to learn. - UndeadPheasant1yrCommented
ten times to fourteen times
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should be lvl 2
[Caught in the eyes of the spider has leveled up to Lvl 1!- You can now perceive a target's movements by a tenth of a second. - UndeadPheasant1yrCommented
class should be assassin
[Aracane has finished her mutation! All stats have increased by 25% while her strength and agility has been increased by 50% because of her class Rouge. +1 agility and +1 strength will be granted upon leveling up] - UndeadPheasant2yrCommented
he's 18, he had a birthday
''I'm Saint, huh?!" Alex mumbled; his face showed neither joy nor surprise; he could now be counted in the rank of the strongest. While it's true that he had stepped into the Saint Realm at the age of 17, Alex knew well that he must become arrogant; there is still lot of people out there stronger than him, the road is still long. - UndeadPheasant2yrCommented
Instead of Mr. Knight, Sir Knight would be more appropriate
''Mr. Knight, the emperor wishes to see you.'' An attendant approached Alex and announced. - UndeadPheasant2yrReplied to Nickaido
then it can't be level 10
Skills: [Advanced Appraisal Level 1] [Item box Level 2 (+ 2 SP) ➤ Level 4] [Swift Fingers Max] [Divine Sense Level 4] [Throwing knife Level 5] [Dark Vision Level 2] [Dual Wielding Level 2] [Accel Level 3] [Knife Art Level 4] [Link Level 3] [Gun Art Level Level 10] [High Regeneration Level 2 (+ 2 SP) ➤ Level 4] [Mana Recovery Level 7] [Synthesize Level 6 (+6 SP) ➤ Level 10 max] ➤ Crimson Bullet [Shadow Shift Level 3] - UndeadPheasant2yrReplied to Bhar_Yo
then you should describe that happening, don't just skip that entire piece of dialogue it makes no dam sense
After some minutes of negotiation between the voice and Devon, they settled for 10 task points for 5000 gold coins. - UndeadPheasant2yrCommented
hate to break it to you, but third degree burns don't hurt, they can't, not physically anyways. this is because third degree burns burn out and kill the nerve endings
Unlike Eren who didn't utter a word despite his third-degree burns, Ron and Dino were pretty vocal about their situations. Their metal skin spell had again become their bane as the spell retained the effects of fire landed on it like a usual metal. - UndeadPheasant2yrCommentedCh 1755 Crimson Shower
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I though it was three illusions?
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hate to break it to you but he didn't invent the salute that his regime used. he was a big fan of America and American Football especially, at the time that salute was actually a common movement used by cheerleaders, and he liked it, so he used it. another interesting fact is that he and Gerald R Ford, the founder of Ford cars, had a mutual respect for each other, so much so that both of them had a picture of the other on their desks'.
That kind of manipulation technique has been proved again and again. A perfect example was a certain tyrant with a weird mustache who invented a salute during World War II to incite patriotism. - UndeadPheasant2yrCommented
Typo here, not sure what you actually meant.
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this description was pulled before Karan had his transformation so to speak. So she was only an inch taller before Karan joined the cultivation world.
Appearance - "Her looks can be only described as godly. Long straight silky black hair that reached to her waist, sky blue eyes, smooth fair skin with a little natural tan, kissable red lips and the sexiest smile in the world with cute dimples on her cheeks. Long sexy legs, wide hips with a perfectly rounded ass, slim waist, big perky boobs with perfect proportionate figure her body is to die for. She stood at 5'10 an inch taller than Karan. She was of Indian and American descent."