for someone who's trying to lie low, he made a huge scene out of nothing. it all started due to him cursing about the price of a very base level healing treatment. something that most people would be used to(albeit maybe complaining silently about it)

progeny means offspring. so he was probably sold as an egg, or shortly after being born.

do all 11 year olds think like this?

but if it was for that, standing out that much seems counterintuitive since more people higher up will pay close attention too him while he wants to disappear occasionally to the Wizarding world

I find it a little odd that he keeps showing signs of 'young master syndrome' despite thinking of not making any enemies. someone who doesn't want to make enemies doesn't go around thinking they'll get revenge everything they get emplbarrased. and I'm finding myself cringing everything he does so

you keep calling the mom he and him, which is confusing. especially when both the mom and dad have VERY similar names.

wasn't he still slightly off center with a single arrow? what do you mean he's perfect woth three at once now?

I need more lol

Unless he sees this new world as fake, I find it wierd to be so disconnected with it. He seems like an ancient master who sees himself above it all, despite being just a reincarnated mortal

I binged the story so far and am really enjoying it. one minor pet peeve would be he seems a little disconnected from everyone despite being from modern earth. Would like to see him at least be more accepting of Xia Lihua's advances, since he feels like a eunuch so far.

"gonk with a gun" sounds better as a phrase than "gonk with an iron", so it would make sense even in this setting for someone to use gun over iron in this situation imo

is this a one shot? it seemed to wrap itself up already. Seemed like an interesting premise if you fleshed out his life as a noble, and the events leading up to this annulment cancelation

wasn't she the one who wanted to wait two years before giving a name?

Do we know which stark is ruling right now? I forget if they said his first name yet

Reading the first chapter the story seems really interesting. but I had no idea about what the story was about from the title and synopsis. You might want to change that to make the story easier to find

I like the direction so far

The paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences makes it a little jarring to read

She defended her sect, why is that a bad impression?

didn't disrupting the transference cause it to be randomized? how could he control it? and from so far way too?

his death law was sitting in his soul when that guy he killed in the beginning tried to take over his body. So he probably first discovered it much earlier than that.