its to show how cruel they are and after re reading i can understand how you think the snapping would be quick i shall re write that part

No i did mean reborn as like most stories with someone being placed into another body they feel confused and dont understand what is happening but there body moves on instinct and thats what i was trying to get across but thanks for the feed back as it can be hard to make sure the right message gets across when you are writing the story

may i ask what you found difficult about it