Ethri

So their cultivation doesn't offer prolonged life?

He's not even 13 years old yet. He'd better be unmarried, lol!

Did their territories get linked to the Constella network?

Then why build the roads?

Lol, 500 bicycles over an airship. Guess that's fewer trips, but the road to Coalheart is going to be a bumpy ride.

Ummm...call back the airship; they need a ride!

Finally! We've all been waiting for this epiphany to hit.

Gargoyle plushies!!

Need to work on your transitions between actions. The repetitive use of "then" or "and then" was excessive for this fight. In most instances, they could be removed entirely without affecting the narration much.