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Melody_F6mthCommentedwhy dispise a child for an injury they received during childhood. I mean, if he was in a situation that his feet can be burned that badly doesn't that mea his parent should have been watching him.
Chen Hu's situation was not much better. When Chen Hu was little, his feet were burned and he became a cripple. Although he was the youngest son in the family, his two older brothers were seven or eight years older than him, and he was a cripple, so he was not well liked by his parents.- Melody_F6mthPosted
I had to stop after hitting chapter 8 because the wrong story was put in and hasn't been corrected. Some authors like to advertise their other works which is fine but at least put the missing chapters in. The story goes from her slashing a door down to some pawnshop incident and a sudden character growth without explaination (this is why chapters shouldnt be missing). I couldnt keep reading after that. However I do think it has potential to be a good story. I doubt the missing chapters would bother this much if it wasnt. It just needs some maintence...... And if it was translated maybe get a second opinion.
detailThe Full-Leveled Healer Transmigrates to a Real and Fake Rich Daughter StoryGeneral · Sky Cold - Melody_F8mthCommented
Poor guy. I hope this new life is everything he wishes for.
From the very start…I was stripped of a proper life. I wasn't given a chance. "This was the hand I was dealt"--yeah, it sure was. What a shitty hand it was. Sometimes…I even blame my parents for this. "If my mother was able to give me a healthy body, I wouldn't have to live like this" or "If my mother just aborted me from the start"...Seriously, I want out of this life. Enough is enough. It's either this "Reincarnation Online" or, well…He thought. - Melody_F9mthCommented
as my creative writing teacher always said "Show don't tell"
Luo Feng was bound to the Treasure Prompter System by chance. - Melody_F1yrReplied to TackcaT
naw, it was definitely methane poisoning which would have made her die in her sleep just like this.
One day, Xiaoguo had just fallen asleep when she was roused out of her slumber by a series of violent shakes. In her daze, she heard a tender voice in her ear crying, "Mother, mother, mother… ." - Melody_F1yrCommentedCh -1 Character Illustrations
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I mean I know Domestic violence is wrong but I just don't have it in me to care in this case😅🤷😅
"Are you crazy? I'm your wife!" - Melody_F1yrReplied to Wolfery
Isnt the main use of her skill healing? how can they take any kind of damage with her skill going?
'If I could be as strong as her or maybe something close, then I can help people like she did.' I thought to myself. - Melody_F1yrCommentedHowever, at this moment, Pei Yunge felt a trace of pity that was rarely seen. She comforted him, "At least the total score adds up to more than 100 marks."
- Melody_F1yrCommentedPei Yunge thought for a moment, before her eyes curved as she held her cheeks with her hands and reminded him kindly, "And Older Brother, don't pick any wild flowers by the roadside."
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I think you just said Moran or stupid in like 6 languages and I'm all for it
Had she done something wrong? - Melody_F1yrReplied to Jacqueline_Bryant
OMG! Changlin is the perfect was to describe her! Good thinking!
Had she done something wrong? - Melody_F1yrCommented
Aw, this is a big step for her. Shes finally consciously letting someone in as her friend.
Beside him, Pei Yunge's red lips curled up. "Chu Zhixing, can you protect me?" - Melody_F1yrCommented
what is he** is with all the "Soon"?
Soon. - Melody_F1yrReplied to KML
HOLY F***! Modern day Spiderman
Chu Zhixing, who was trying to climb over the wall, gave up and returned to class. - Melody_F1yrCommented
Yeah, sure. An experienced Elder, leader of an important family, and talented business man couldn't possibly see through the obviously weak facade you put on.
"The Old Master only cares about the bloodlines. It's no use no matter how well I treat him," Qin Youjiao said unhappily. - Melody_F1yrCommented
if it was 670 before shouldn't this actually be like 330?
[EXP: [70/800] - Melody_F1yrCommented
Feeling the embarrassment just thinking about if my mother did this.
"Uuugh…" Elena groaned a bit overwhelmed by me, but she couldn't escape my embrace anymore, and ended accepting her fate rather quickly. - Melody_F1yrCommented"How odd, well, whatever's the case, I will just buy these tiles- I mean, take over them forcefully!" I said. "I wish things could be so easy back on Earth, just go to an uncharted land and just say it's yours! Wow, that would be so easy…"
- Melody_F1yrCommentedSeriously, Squirrel-folk were so cute, I feel like I was living in a dream I had as a little girl where I dreamed of visiting the towns of beast people from books like Narnia.