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XandorRoyal10mthCommentedCh 1 Prologue: The Count's Castle- XandorRoyal2yrCommented
That first line is the same as what you used to describe him earlier.
This paragraph has been deleted. - XandorRoyal2yrPosted
VR is already a great book written by a talented author. Drip has transferred a lot of the skill he gained from TGDS (The Great Demon System) to VR. Speaking with drip will show that he doesn't exactly have a 'set' direction he wants the story to move into. He has a general idea that is open to change. If a reader thinks of an improvement that would definitely improve the plot, Drip will add it. In my opinion that is what has made TGDS and will make VR so great. Drip doesn't close off the rest of the world and is open to change within his novel.
- XandorRoyal2yrCommented
That skip really dodnt feel forced. Good job author, others usually dont do it as well.
Time passed, and the years went by. With the Nari Tribe as their backers, the Varen Tribe had been quite peaceful. At first, a few tribes were afraid that the Varen Tribe would use this chance to began charging tributes. Although the Nari Tribe wouldn't help them attack anyone, they wouldn't be scared of being attacked as well. - XandorRoyal2yrCommented
Something tells me we are about to experience what is referred to as the "time skip"
"10 years, that is as far as we can wait. The kids at 10 years old will be at most 20, not to mention that those at 10 years should be just a small part of the total. I doubt the Nari Tribe will intervene after so much time has passed by. Besides, it is not like we can't try other ways of weakening them in the time being." - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
Just a casual tracking chip.
"Oh, I had an extremely powerful tracking chip installed in your body since birth, and I only just reactivated it now… Which may or might not be illegal in a lockdown. For some reason, the signal was all messed up like your body had eaten half the chip or something, that was why it took me so long to arrive and find your planet…" - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
I know by 'Earth' you actually mean the planet, although I'd still rename it to be ground or planet.
When, suddenly, the earth began shaking, clouds began forming in the sky, casting a black shadow upon all in its path, cracks forming on the ground spreading and splitting even mountains in half as everyone tightly hung onto the nearest thing they could grab. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
I do wonder who would win.
Then pulling up a piece of paper, she wrote down a quick note telling her servants that she will be gone for a while and that they should not worry, just in case they felt the urge to call her father again and him starting an all-out war with the military, something that made her head hurt to even think about. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
"Fake memories" Hmmmm
The last thing she saw before both her body and mind were completely burned to dust was her fake memories that, in her mind, she considered as real… almost like her entire life had flashed right before her eyes. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
Oh, not *Suicide... Just... an eternity in damnation.
Both were one of the strongest families in the country, and both being families he had dreamt of working for when he grew older. So, due to that fact along with their difference in status and never talking to each other prior, he could not help but become slightly tense by talking to her. It had nothing to do with her beauty since he knew that it would never happen and it would be suicide trying to go for the demon lord's girl. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
"She."
"Anyways, enough of my rambling. To get to the point, I might be the 3rd seat, but since I am still new, I had to prove my loyalty more before I was able to meet the boss. She used this mission to capture you as some sort of test, so even though you would have been the new 3rd seat if you joined, the boss promised that if I completed my mission and brought you to our side, then she would extend the limit to the top 4, and allow me to see her face, so you just got unlucky by rather inopportune timing," Nags explained in a calm yet serious manner. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
Author... what the **** is this character. (Character[s]??)
"God damn it Hikari, one of these days you're going to get us both killed with how brain dead you are. The "boss" has let us, by us I mean you off with so much shit that I doubt she would have let something as big as this slide," - XandorRoyal3yrReplied to Drip
It would be really cool if we could get more.
(Check paragraph comment for art!) - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
Author, the funny part of this paragraph is that spring break just started for me today. What a coincidence.
"Okay class, now that I have everyone's attention, make sure to study hard during the break as I will be assigning a test on the Pythagorean theorem and properties of a triangle as soon as you get back, I will also be assigning a short, 1000 word essay about the benefits of being a country Z citizen, just to keep you company during the break and keep your minds fresh. And, yes, before you ask, it will definitely be graded. You are now all dismissed, have a good spring break class," Rolf said with a devilish smirk and a serious voice, making the entire class grumble in annoyance, completely changing their once faces cheerful that were excited for the break, no one daring to voice their complaints as they knew it would not end too well for them. - XandorRoyal3yrReplied to XandorRoyal
And reading the next chapter, he does.
'Umm… I am not sure if it is my place to speak my lord but you insisted I always share my opinion with you and let you know what I am thinking with complete honesty. So, that is what I will do… Why did you save this "Baldskie". It is not like you to go out of your way to save others like this. I see no benefit from doing this. But, of course, that is with my limited mind which pales in comparison to yours. I am sure that you, my lord had a plan that I just could not understand or predict,' Abby said to Moby using their mind link as they walked towards their classroom together. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
You know Author? She is definitely like every one of the floor guardians in Overlord. She always thinks her lord has some convoluted plan that she can not understand, just as they think Ains does.
'Umm… I am not sure if it is my place to speak my lord but you insisted I always share my opinion with you and let you know what I am thinking with complete honesty. So, that is what I will do… Why did you save this "Baldskie". It is not like you to go out of your way to save others like this. I see no benefit from doing this. But, of course, that is with my limited mind which pales in comparison to yours. I am sure that you, my lord had a plan that I just could not understand or predict,' Abby said to Moby using their mind link as they walked towards their classroom together. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
Hey Author, I've seen this a few times but: You said in this "None aggression." It's actually "Non aggression" basically just drop the e. Thanks!
"Out of nowhere, many angels and gods descended from the skies above, raining magic on all the civilians bellow… They had broken our treaty of none aggression and to leave the mortal realm alone… They managed to do it before I could as I had planned to attack them in the next 10-50 years which was really unlucky," - XandorRoyal3yrReplied to Drip
I mean possibly, but I've got my eye on you author.
'Bingo! The Best part is that the transition is so natural that they won't even feel like they changed at all! However, I would like to tell you that this world of wanna-be superheroes that you live in for some reason acts very demon-like in nature. So, the changes of the transformation are not usually very apparent like for this Alex friend of yours. It's very entertaining to see! To my knowledge, most humans 100 years ago before the discovery of these abilities were nowhere near this malicious! nothing close to how it is today!' Avilia said with a small chuckle. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
I've been reading this slowly and I can not stop laughing. 🤣 Just me?
"S-so, T-that is why I have decided to give everyone a perfect, passing grade on this exam despite all the low scores! This all happened due to my negligence… also, expect an extra $1000 in your school's bank account as a personal apology from me and the school." The General said, making most of the high ranking and even low ranking students stop sobbing and complaining to celebrate. - XandorRoyal3yrCommented
Hey Author? I thought Avilia was Demon Queen like a very, very long time ago. Like she didnt even know satin, who was tied in with christianity, was. Since he is tied into christianity that's at least 2000 years, how does she know about 100 years prior?
'Bingo! The Best part is that the transition is so natural that they won't even feel like they changed at all! However, I would like to tell you that this world of wanna-be superheroes that you live in for some reason acts very demon-like in nature. So, the changes of the transformation are not usually very apparent like for this Alex friend of yours. It's very entertaining to see! To my knowledge, most humans 100 years ago before the discovery of these abilities were nowhere near this malicious! nothing close to how it is today!' Avilia said with a small chuckle.