Certainly a great opportunity to learn more regarding the different elements necessary for a novel. I too have put some time into looking at other novels contemplatively, searching primarily for inspiration.

“as Rena and Elina had* their hands joined together in a silent plea”

OH, I also went through the process of losing 60+ pounds. I look way different, and I feel the difference as well.

Past that, I kinda left Webnovel for a while as I lacked time between work, school, and my recently acquired girlfriend.

I’m quite a bit late as well. Yes, quite a bit has changed and I’m currently attending a community college due to insufficient funds due to my own neglect. I attended one semester at a University, and learned quickly the stupidity of how every service is baracaded by a payment of some kind, and administrative personel there aren’t helpful with any problems you may acquire along the way.

You know, I have that very same question. Like what’s with this ‘love’ stuff anyway? I’m joking of course, but seriously it is quite annoying in my humble opinion. I can see where others are infatuated with the idea of familial love in novels, but I loath it. Again I repeat, just my opinion, but I’m here to read a story and the majority of novels on here ruin the plot with their pseudo romantic written expression of love.

“Don’t do works that require your body.”? Shouldn’t this instead be, “Don’t do any work that requires your body.” Or better yet, “Don’t do any physically strenuous activities”, there are multiple forms for the same piece of dialogue. Whatever fits the tone, fits the tone.

Name fits your comment. A uniform character.

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We all know why we’re here, smh

Less of a counterpoint and more of a clarification, but nonetheless here is a counter to the countered counter of the counterargument: That's not really happening now is it? Physical maturity seems to be all around at the same rate as our world, which is also generally tied to the cognitive ability (due to the capabilities of the mind tied to the physical development of it) as those with higher capacities/capabilities in mana would also be more physically developed. Which could in turn cause individuals to age progressively faster without some kind of magic to reverse or slow its progression.

Ya know, good points I must say. Nicely thought out, and fairly solid logic. However this is where I introduce my counter to your counterargument: There isn’t a direct indication of advanced cognitive development resulting from the presence of mana and if so, those of a much higher ‘caliber’ would be absurdly intelligent. Such as the mother or sisters, or anyone else. Overall they’re all just ‘meh’, so the only point that stands is the conclusion of their backgrounds being the cause of their cognition. Yet still there is only so much that one’s background can produce within a child’s mind, but still a difficult point to shake. Bravo and good day.

I want consistent logic.

I won’t, as I stated. You’re simply confirming my comment.

Never mind. I will not be finishing this novel, as I will not be paying for this.

This is ridiculous🫠