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Andrew_Seguro

Andrew_Seguro

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Love novels and dreams to become a novelist

2020-04-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro2yr
    Commented

    Bro can anyone edit all the chapts that have wrong grammar on it?

    I took out another packet and give it to her, I have to admit ashlyn is a glutton. What she is now eating is her parent's death who are the whole grade above her but she who is a whole grade below is eating their diet.
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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro2yr
    Replied to Andrew_Seguro

    No I just need more practice guys

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    Milf Lover
    Realistic · Andrew_Seguro
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro2yr
    Posted

    First of all, this is amazing. I like how the mc is smart and has a great view on how he perceives things. The novel is fun and full of anticipation which makes me want to expect more. Overall it is really detailed and when I got to the 3000 chapt, my mind was full of anticipation and excitement. The 3000 chapter is just the beggining yall

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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Why? Why is the chapt so short? 😭

    Ch 41 Chapter 41: Voting
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Am I the only one that's impatient for more chapts?

    Ch 40 Chapter 40: Becoming CEO.
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Why did the chapter take so long to come out author?

    Ch 38 Chapter 38: Base Building Pills.
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Why is the next update taking so long

    Ch 37 Chapter 37: Stolen Kiss
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Good, nice chapt author

    Ch 62 62 - Hisss
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Haha bro, the majority of people are literally thinking about the step bro thing

    "It's decided!" Maira seemed to have made up her mind when she asked Cristina, "I want to adopt you as my daughter. Would you accept that?"
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Replied to Soeris

    Same

    Ch 59 59 - Angry Birds
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Posted

    Honestly,I find the story interesting and the majority of the story is mostly focused on the game than in real life of the mc. Anyway, the story is pleasant and easy to understand.

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    Realm of Myths and Legends
    Games · DaoistZenFeng
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    You have my full support author!

    Ch 59 59 - Angry Birds
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Good job, that was intriguing to read

    Ch 33 Chapter 33: White Aura
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    It's not edited yet?

    Ch 54 54 - Name
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Posted

    Aight nice story author keep it up, chapts all free? Hope you keep, your promise on that. I'll be reading this daily and support and vote power stones if I can

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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Aight thanks again author and azurtha

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Formation Collapses
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Replied to Adisial

    Haha iknr

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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    A mistake, its supposed to be Cristina not carol

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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Aight mate

    "Think about it from my perceptive please, and if you think I'll change when I have my memories back, I won't. You can trust me, and I can prove it. I heard from Layla that vampires that are created from someone can't go against there leader, they can't attack them or go against there order. So I want you to turn me into a vampire. To prove that I won't betray you.... Can you do all that for me?" Cia asked.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Andrew_Seguro
    Andrew_Seguro3yr
    Commented

    Damn. .. That's lit, aight ill be back when theres a new chapt mate

    Ch 52 52 - Snake
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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