Stolen work with bought and fake reviews. Seriously, author is dumb enough to buy 11 reviews and have 0 comments in the entire story. And still, dude thinks that deleting reviews and comments that call his dumb ass out would help... Link to the original work btw, https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10710606/1/A-Demon-Lord-s-Hero

Second review! Previous got deleted by this wannabe thief in literal seconds, and now I will have small message for this degenerate: If you can't even accept the truth or defend your point of view, you should've never did anything public, you are beyond pathetic. Seriously, I can do this all day, and your parents won't stop regretting not aborting you!) Review: Stolen work with bought and fake reviews. Seriously, author is dumb enough to buy 11 reviews and have 0 comments in the entire story. And still, dude thinks that deleting reviews and comments that call his dumb ass out would help... Link to the original work btw, https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10710606/1/A-Demon-Lord-s-Hero

Wanna spoiler? Great Red is Odawing

You don't bow cause you aren't capable of it physically, not because you are cool. Cringe

10/10, Peak of fic writing. It doesn't get better than this. The very best of concept of ATG fics. Great MC, great idea and great execution!

Pot calling a kettle

Great concept and writing! The atmosphere of the unknown, creeping doom that you created is fantastic! You did great to pass vibes of something unnatural, dangerous and unknown, something you can't comprehend or stop. Amazing work

You know that Alice’s father is son of Senzaemon? Leonora is the one who wasn’t in a family

Well, if his cursed technique is Restoration (moving things to past state), his semblance is Tenfold(amplification of present), then to finish set his quirk can be Time erasure (making things go in future) like King Crimson

+1

+1

+

If name Talos will be chosen, Tu’um (or shouts from Skyrim) would be cool

But won’t it be more logical to make Sikkim and Tsukasa to be roommates, considering they have same specialty but different way, Ikki is more technique fighter, while MC is strength/speed type. They can teach a lot of things to each other

But why would she even gamble on something like this? If she fell in love that would be huge problem, why not just arrange him with a guy? Alice for example or someone else

I thought you said his roommate will not be a problem considering his appearance, how Stella cannot be a problem?

But with this severe changes in timeline would they even be born?

What tropes? In DxD Japan is in no way unique, strongest or somewhat interesting to whole other world. And in no way any influential/powerful being would go to Japan to get in Kuoh’s academy, just to be involved in “plot”. If world has same laws, same characters, same history then it is this world, not some other. If MC doesn’t concentrate on “important” characters, it doesn’t mean it is another world, it means that they are not important to MC. For example Rias is NOT interesting being, she doesn’t have great character for adult inventor, she doesn’t have unique ability or power, she is just lazy spoiled “noble” princess which are hundreds in supernatural world. And if we are talking about “useless” chicks, then ALL of summoned devils have solid reason to be summoned. With only thing I agree with you is that MC is not villain, he is more chaotic neutral/ true neutral. About energy, everything is an energy and you can change one type of energy to another, so why can’t Marcus just create infinite amount of electricity and transform it into magic.

If they produce carbonated drinks i one piece, shouldn't he've got information about fabrication process?