Awesome beginning with a great premise of SAS 4 system I thought no one would ever write anything with that but it was not only being written but also so good 👍👍👍.

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awesome elegantly written with complete and solid logic in the story

great story, grammar is pretty weak hope you continue to improve as write more. Hopefully you'll write more good luck 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

the hungry masses are waiting for your content please feed them :)

amazing concept can not wait for you write this world. please continue this story this has got me hooked. Will love to see how this story unfolds.

awesome please keep going it's really interesting

awesome

awesome please keep going

Awesome story would love for you to continue with the story

Please continue to write the story with any of the choices you take.

Awesome story to find and a great read with good character development I actually care for helena and dorea but wasn't dorea married to a potter.

Amazing chapter as always your story is the reason I use webnovel

Try to improve the sentence structure otherwise an awesome chapter thank you for having the courage and tenacity to write.

Awesome chapter hope you continue