This book is very well do I just wish their was more chapters but as long as at least a chapter a week is released i feel that this book would do wonderfully. keep up the good work.

The story is amazing and I am currently waiting for more. The way you brought out the feelings of thor's daughter and the fact she is so oblivious to her powers makes this interesting. I am curious to see how long her life span should be.

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I enjoy the fact the author has gonna out of their way to put chronos in a different light then I have seen before, I just hope to find out the reasoning behind him focusing on one person and who it is. The Humans are developed in such a way that makes sense looking through the eyes of an immortal being, the only thing I personally would love to see in the future is how our MC handles the death of one of his companions because he lacked the original prowess of the abilities of time.

I already love this story