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"none of your business"

Sad to see it end, but I enjoyed the story. thanks author

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This novel reads more as a slow day by day than an action adventure with slow pacing through roughly 100 chapters, the protagonist is defined as very ordinary and lacks any clear development so far, the worldbuilding is interesting but the protagonist is lacking meaningful strength, talent, wisdom or standing to make any story impact other than being fortunate. The romance is good enough though it seems his potential partners will lack in presence as they will be away for the majority of the time. Good but unfulfilling.

Thanks for the chapters!

Great and unique spin on a system novel, superb story development as a fanfiction with excellent pacing so far. Protagonist is well designed to be enjoyable to follow for the journey and very humorous as well.👍

As far as blending OC and other works goes( disclaimer I barely know any of them lol), and the mix of genres this is one of my favorites. The writing is informative and deep in setting the worlds visited and pacing/story development is excellent and satisfactory, and finally the interactions and humor is a fine aftertaste. The characters are what sold me personally as Zeel is incredibly unique yet simple as a main lead and his journey of self-discovery is what I anticipate the most, and the romance is fairly refreshing with a chaotic harem. If you can get past the brutal and unsavory content then welcome to madness with Zeel Crawford.

Thanks for the chapter, this is one of my favorites so I'll drop a review soon