Wonder what would happen if Gray Matter was thrown into this mix?

It technically is possible. Heck you could turn into alien if the watch scans their DNA.

Why not just discribe it as a strange hour glass symbold?

It seems you switched POV from Charlie to the MC here without noticing.

I think your meant our rather than are here.

Confirmed MC is simp.

I cant help but Kin and Gin are refrences to Doctor Stones Kinro and Ginro am I the only one?

While they are different. i habe to point out that One belongs to Roman version of the Pantheon. And the other belongs to greek. it’s a common think where Rome would link their gods with others from dofferent pantheons. Most mythological experts believed it to be a way to help intergrate their beliefs. Heck in one story where the gods are chased Away by Typhon it talks about how the gods ran away to egypt disguised as animals. https://youtu.be/KL6o6glC6Fg Good example of what I mean.

Only complain I have is that the chapters seem a little short but that may because of the writing style. Other than that no complaints. It actually fixed one of the major problems with system stories which is state spamming and diving into to much detail.

If I remember corrent in Legends she’s called Abolith.

Thank you for the spelling corection. Though the main difference to be noted between the two is one’s a Titan and the other is a God. Minor differences at a glance. Though historically speaking very different as it would indicate that the Titan version is much older and possibly more powerful than Zeus.

Also to correct my self I’m no mytholgoy expert this is just what learned from self studying.

It’s all good. Just thought I’d point that out becuase in the scene where you talk about Helious dying to me is means your either crossing over into a new mytholgoy. Or your killing a character you had already killed a few chapters ago.

Note just for future refrence. Apollo and Helious are the same god just under different names. Granted I’m mythology expert. Just want to point out your mixing two mythologys here which can get confusing. The greeks, and romans actually did this with all forgien mythologys as well. In one exmaple it’s said that the gods of olympus transformed into the animals that inspired egyptian mythology. They also did it with norse gods as well.

There are different versions. I believe the one your mentioning is listed in the creation mythology.

Fan theroy. The god of the church is also a yandere wifu that’s after Sam.

Stranger Danger!!!

Granted but the rules of war are not exclusive to all out war. They can be applied to single combat as well.

I’m honestly surprised Rao didnt try to presuade the other gods into sTaying out of the fight while also questioning Zeus. While Zod’s theories on war is correct he’s missing a key element. Not all war is fought openly, some are fought on in the hearts and homes of the enemy your eyes settle upon. After all there’s too ways to rule with fear. Make your enemies fear you. Or make them fear being without you.

Interesting combination of different martial stories into your own. Though I feel like I should point out something. Whether good or bad is up to the Author. The martial art styles and systems seem to contradict eachother a little. For exmaple Niko Style mixed with Dou & Sei seems like they would be both a good and bad combination. Again just my thoughts, this seems like a a hard balance that you’ve struck well.