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Pizzzaaaaa22dCommentedSomehow, translator/ author always struggles with the name of their character...and barely any proof read before posting...
Of course, Jack Clark wouldn't know any of this. But after seeing Marcus Lee's tragic appearance, his gaze became even colder.As someone who was fixated on desperately improving himself, after knowing him for so long, Jack Clark regarded Justin Welan as a friend with a bit of shared sentiment.detailMythical Era: I Evolved Into A Stellar-Level BeastEastern · Encounter Atop The Celestial Mountain- Pizzzaaaaa2mthPosted
1☆ because scamming and not fixing in the same week is unnacceptable. Used to be good, but lately been a scam, webnovel or author can't figure thing's out and keep scamming readers by repeating same chapter again and again, no fix as of yet. I lost interest and will stop this book. Also, with all those repeated chapter, no clue if the story don't have blank, most likely have. Until the author and Webnovel get a hand on thing's, a real pain to try to read up to the latest chapters and not worth reading as far as I am concerned.
- Pizzzaaaaa2mthCommentedCh 216 Happy Cooperation!
- Pizzzaaaaa2mthReplied to ZenBartenderCh 217 Follow!
- Pizzzaaaaa2mthReplied to RagingArtPunkCh 191 Absorbing Attributes In Virtual World!
- Pizzzaaaaa3mthCommented
bald-headed youth with long hair? What?
When the light faded away, it revealed a stern-looking, bald-headed youth with long hair. His sharp eyes swept through the place beneath him and finally stopped on Tyrion's body. His smile turned cold and he finally spoke. - Pizzzaaaaa3mthCommented
recap stop here
Lucia stared at the boy in front of her. At this moment, Tyrion's expression gradually calmed down and his anger subsided. However, within his black eyes, a daunting chill emerged. - Pizzzaaaaa3mthCommented
I believe the writer tried/tasted many thing's in the past.
Like someone addicted to glucose suddenly tasting cocaine! it was heaven! - Pizzzaaaaa3mthCommentedCh 1280 A worthy opponent?
- Pizzzaaaaa8mthCommented
thx,much better quality than before,like night and day
Edited by RED - Pizzzaaaaa8mthCommented
thx,much better quality than before,like night and day
Translated by Jim - Pizzzaaaaa10mthPosted
Good story overall, lack an editor for too many mistakes made when talking about a characters using the name of another one or wrong grammar or spelling. A character with so much power should not be played so many times as if it is normal and easily done, with the attempts to play him mostly failing but once in a while succeeding, thus causing major issue and plot twist, exceptionnal circumstances needing to be met.But even with all of this, I went throughout the whole book and didn't stop, proving that even with all those mistakes, making the plot a little more shallow in fault of me finding a better word, the book remain a piece that I enjoyed reading to the very end and read in about 2 weeks. The ending is interesting and leaves the door open for the next books, which I haven't confirmed by looking at the author notes if he plans to do so. But some other readers seem to say that this book would be the start of the trilogy, with us meeting again with the divine being in my vampire system and my werewolfe system. I thank the author for his overall wonderful work and hope my review is seen in a constructive way and be used to help the author raise his "author lvl" even higher. More personal opinion, I would have loved to see the divine being get hurt in a horrible way (referring to when it is said that Ray now has obtained back many weird skills, some which should be why the gods feared him and get used right away to make her pay back a little for all she did to him and manipulating him), her being forgiven and let off way too easily.Ps: Don't pay attention to my own grammar. This review was done by phone, and English is my second language, which I never studied to get better at.
- Pizzzaaaaa10mthCommented
quest board*
"I have seen you fight for the last couple of days while we have been practising outside. I have a good idea of what would suit you. I will keep an eye on the local Quest bored and see if anything pops up but I do have to ask you one more time. Although I am almost certain I can avoid death, I'm not a hundred percent sure this will work, even when I used this method on myself I nearly died, if it doesn't kill you and is not successful, there is a good chance you could become crippled, unable to use Ki at all." - Pizzzaaaaa1yrCommentedCh 1028 You maniac!
- Pizzzaaaaa1yrReplied to Ultimate_FartCh 1027 Yes or No?
- Pizzzaaaaa2yrCommented
have him in your party? more like in your pantie^^
To be close with a character such as that, Queen was keen to have him in her party as soon as possible.