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vincentnolan2yrCommentedtoo much pov change is annoying. So, please do it sparingly.
(AN: My preferred style of writing for first person is to avoid multiple perspectives and either write from First-person for the Mc or third person neutral for anything else. Moving forward this will be the recurring theme. Anything that isn't first-person perspective will be third-person neutral (omniscient third person). I'm aware it's a little unorthodox to switch between first and third but it's how I want to write this and I feel you'll come to enjoy it. Note that it will only ever switch between these two and not bugle around third-person Mc perspective. Mc perspective is first, every other perspective is told through third neutral. The switches will start few and far between but become more frequent once the world is developed to a certain extent. Thanks for understanding)- vincentnolan2yrCommented
5.7? usally in these novels everybody is a giant. average height representation. thank you.
A man, older than me but still under what would be deemed middle-aged, with shaking bright blue eyes and patchy blonde hair that was already receding. He was taller than me but shorter than the sleeping man, wearing an expression that could only be described as careful terror, maybe about 5.7ft. The jutting clack of metal against metal rang out as he wheeled in a sort of cart, but that sound was drowned out by the rapid pace of his heart. We were twenty metres away yet this man's beating heart was like a cannon in my ear, firing second after second. - vincentnolan2yrCommentedCh 1 Awake
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fucking disappointment. You were making fun of all those authors in the first chapter.
"I used to be a human just like you, but from another world. We spoke differently and have different views to the humans you're used to. For example, we don't believe in slavery anymore." - vincentnolan2yrCommentedCh 26 "Escape"
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who tf calls other guy hot? unless they are gay. usally we just say good looking.
'Damn, this guy is hot! Is that his girlfriend by his side? Wow, what an incredibly good-looking couple!' - vincentnolan2yrCommented
that is what she..
"Finally in, you little bastard…" - vincentnolan2yrReplied to primeneo
pale beauty.
His appearance was delicate and pretty, but his eyes were like a deep pool, flickering with a calm light. Perhaps it was because he was a little nervous that there would be a ripple. - vincentnolan2yrReplied to Ancient_
this is why i find most romance cringy and pathetic most of the time. Her act is annoying because she didn't even tell him about her power, but she acts like he owes her explanation.
The book had endowed Grimm with a quasi-canine olfactory ability. - vincentnolan2yrReplied to UnfetteredMind
retard
A Little Romance - vincentnolan2yrCommented
i wouldn't mind having this curse you speak of.
"In the Holy Flame Empire, humans are no different from slaves. There isn't much a daughter without any cultivation talent can ever bring to them. Beauty without strength or status is no different than a curse. - vincentnolan2yrCommented"Unrepentant! Mukri, take her and go run laps! I'm sick of you two!" Harun ordered, and with a "I got you boss" wink, Mukri followed Gulseni, who under Harun's orders, couldn't resist running laps around the Birusk village. Satisfied, Jiyan pulled out a jade slip, engraved the name "Gulseni" at the top of the list, and took her rightful seat—asserting her dominance.
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feminists with power? the horror.
In that battle, the God-Empress demonstrated a terrifying battle-power that put even Demi-Emperors in awe—butchering the dragon clan's leadership before they could activate the clan's formation. Seizing the dragon clan's resources, Dilnaz sentenced them post-mortem of over 100 crimes against women, and as the blood of over 100,000 still stained her blade, proclaimed the creation of the Saint-Empress Court, welcoming all resentful fairies and Goddesses of the 33 Heavens to join her banner. She then returned to the Highest Heaven, put her clan's remaining Dao Reserves on trial and...beheaded them all—thereby seizing absolute control of the Empyrean clan's resources. Imperial Princes of two generations gave up all claim to the throne, pledging on their Dao to serve the new sovereign. - vincentnolan2yrCommented
the way he roasts the m9st eveil people in the world is like
"You don't need to tell me all this, Kolof, for I have always been more or less aware of your deep, abiding obsession of me, you moron. At least when I had time to spare. But if you continue to believe that your value is higher than it really is, which is nothing, you will pay more than I'd do now. Because your soul as well as your whole existence is of no importance to Sirkol and the others. You see? In a way, you are deader than I am. - vincentnolan2yrCommentedCh 9 Pathetic
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I would have given it kore stars if it weren't using "theirs" to describe single person. not once but hundreds of times. it get annoying. You put the pay wall in chapter 14 so you better fix those mistakes.
This book has been deleted. - vincentnolan2yrCommentedCh 3 Drunk Succubus Dilemma
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just be chad bro
"Just lift bro." "Get a clean haircut." "Dress better." "Be confident." - vincentnolan2yrCommented
so did he do it?
Dave lived 52 years in this world, at first studying to become a tool of diplomacy, as it is expected from young noblewomen, then when he was sent away to get married, he got even more lucky, as he caught one of the princes' eye and he was able to marry into the royal family. His extreme inclination towards magic was noticed, he was given official training and later was given a lab to conduct studies. Dave had a really easy life in that world, he was given money, time, servants and attention to reach whatever he wanted, not counting the gender problem.